A Warrior called Roland

georgezaky108 · Sep 2018

A game character I am currently working on

Image: https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/012/772/023/large/george-zaky-bake.jpg?1536435198

Image: https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/012/772/050/large/george-zaky-wire1.jpg?1536435294

georgezaky108 · Sep 2018

Image: https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/013/016/302/large/george-zaky-texture-test.jpg?1537656088

Image: https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/013/016/286/large/george-zaky-texture-wireframe.jpg?1537656088

texturing in progress inside Blender 2.8.

Brian "Panda" Choi · Sep 2018

I'd revisit those folds. They seem a LITTLE too unreactive to anchor points where the folds would originate from.

Relative to ideal human proportions, his arms are way to long. Should be halfway down the thighs, not to the knees.

georgezaky108 · Oct 2018

model

zaha · Oct 2018

Wow, nice job overall!

The face looks a bit flat from the side though, like he ran into a wall that squashed his nose in. At least for a fox, looks more like a human silhouette.

georgezaky108 · Oct 2018

zaha said:

Wow, nice job overall!
The face looks a bit flat from the side though, like he ran into a wall that squashed his nose in. At least for a fox, looks more like a human silhouette.

Thanks!😃 ,I will redo the whole head due to uv problems

georgezaky108 · Oct 2018

pose test

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/57/jmdq3l5edm3l.png

georgezaky108 · Oct 2018

Image: https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/013/257/168/large/george-zaky-11comp.jpg?1538766223

Image: https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/013/257/171/large/george-zaky-22comp.jpg?1538766057

Image: https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/013/257/188/large/george-zaky-33comp.jpg?1538766071

Image: https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/013/257/215/large/george-zaky-44comp.jpg?1538766096

Finally Done. What do you guys think?
my artstation for breakdown and hi-res:
https://www.artstation.com/georgezaky108
available on cgtrader:
https://www.cgtrader.com/3d-models/character/fantasy/roland-warrior

georgezaky108 · Oct 2018

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Alex_J · Oct 2018

I like this character a lot -- especially the color scheme and the fabric textures are really nice, IMO. I like the fur color designs as well -- super cool what you did there.

But there is one thing that throws me off -- it makes the characters face kind of unappealing. Two parts : 1. the nose is way to small and could use a bit of shape. Doesn't need to be a realistic fox nose, but just a hint of that type of nose and a little closer to realistic size would just feel better. 2. Side profile is too flattened. The lower jaw sticks out further than the upper. Underbite, I am pretty sure, is universally unappealing. So I'd suggest just basically pulling the snout out a bit more.

Oh, and a patch of white for "eyebrows" could give a little more likeability to teh character. Kind of like huskie's have.

georgezaky108 · Oct 2018

BIGTIMEMASTER said:

like this character a lot -- especially the color scheme and the fabric textures are really nice, IMO. I like the fur color designs as well -- super cool what you did there.

But there is one thing that throws me off -- it makes the characters face kind of unappealing. Two parts : 1. the nose is way to small and could use a bit of shape. Doesn't need to be a realistic fox nose, but just a hint of that type of nose and a little closer to realistic size would just feel better. 2. Side profile is too flattened. The lower jaw sticks out further than the upper. Underbite, I am pretty sure, is universally unappealing. So I'd suggest just basically pulling the snout out a bit more.

Oh, and a patch of white for "eyebrows" could give a little more likeability to teh character. Kind of like huskie's have.

Thanks I've got your point.

georgezaky108 · Oct 2018

Now with only 5$.
what do you thinks guys?
https://sketchfab.com/models/bc41b556de1c456196c04e4f20932173
https://www.blendermarket.com/products/fox-warrior-roland
https://www.cgtrader.com/3d-models/character/fantasy/roland-warrior

A Warrior called Roland

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