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[WIP] [CC are welcome] Plant Incubator Room - Environment Art

Hey everyone! For this fall I'll be working on a lab scene involving plants. Any Critiques are welcome. :3

This is my initial blockout of the scene, I may rearrange the incubators to the wall.


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  • Lether
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    Lether polycounter lvl 7
    Hey, maybe you should tell us what kind of work you want to achieve :) Do you want to move on your scene ( first person, top view?) or maybe you just want doing some renders ?
  • AkkeeArtist1991
    Lether said:
    Hey, maybe you should tell us what kind of work you want to achieve :) Do you want to move on your scene ( first person, top view?) or maybe you just want doing some renders ?

    Oh Right! Sorry about that!

    I'm trying to achieve several renders of the lab. :3 Any suggestions or tips are always welcome
  • AkkeeArtist1991
    First light pass of the scene. My main focus is one of the plant incubators on the right. I'm using very basic materials to get a feel for how the lighting will go through.

    C&C are always welcome :3
  • Lether
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    Lether polycounter lvl 7
    Good work !
    I don't know that much in lighting. Other people will probably have better feedback than me.
    But more generally, if you want to have the focus on the incubator on the right side on your picture maybe you should slightly lower the importance of the blue screen and the closet top left (lighting ?). This was the two first things i noticed when I saw your shot. Maybe add something that lead to the incubator ? But maybe you already planned this :)

  • AkkeeArtist1991
    Lether said:
    But more generally, if you want to have the focus on the incubator on the right side on your picture maybe you should slightly lower the importance of the blue screen and the closet top left (lighting ?). This was the two first things i noticed when I saw your shot. Maybe add something that lead to the incubator ? But maybe you already planned this :)

    Thank you for the critique. I went back and changed the lighting as well as start importing my textures of the incubator.



  • AkkeeArtist1991
    Textures are coming in nicely!

    Goals for this week are:
    -Finish texturing Plant incubators
    -Texture desk and add clutter details
    -Texture Walls, floor, and ceiling.


  • AkkeeArtist1991
    Textures are coming in nicely! Ceiling is just for reference.

    -Still to add:
    -Clutter on table (notebook, tablets, pencils, etc)
    -Cables to Incubators
    -Small Greenhouse details.

    C&C are always welcome 😊


  • AkkeeArtist1991
    Happy Thanksgiving week everyone!

    I'm in the last push for the project! Though I'm debating if I should pull some lighting out or keep it. I removed the shelf since it was somewhat out of place. I put a cabinet for the moment as I do plan on having something there.



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