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Hello my name is Jacob and I am a student at Lynn University, I'm currently in my portfolio class where I have to make a character. Feedback would be very much appreciated. I do not own the this image, the name of the artist is below. 

Artist Name:  Yutaka Toguchi (Kindcoffe) - https://www.artstation.com/artwork/weOEY 



My Character model 

The character is currently being made in Maya. 

       

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    [UPDATE] 1/27/2020
    I was able to finish the body for the character.  

         


                  


    I got to start the UV for him as well, for now, I'm just simply cutting and sewing the body parts after I will resize them so that all the checkers will be even. 


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    Hey there, you're off to a really solid start but I noticed several proportion issues in your piece. I did a paintover to show you what I mean. I think these are pretty easy to fix and you have a really nice base to do that with!

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    [UPDATE] 02/03/2020
    I added some texture to him and were able to finish the UVs. 

              

    Carabiner, thank you for your response. I made his tank in the front wider than it was before.
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    [UPDATE] 02/10/2020
    I added a different Material for the Character and was drawing on top of the base colors to match the details










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    [UPDATE] 2/18/20

    I did some changes on the character that Carabaner told me about, I didn't change the head because I used a side view drawing from the artist. 
    I added the labels on the character this time. 
    I posed him to look like his walking and added some dust clouds behind him to look like his walking. 









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    [UPDATE] 2/27/2020

    I changed the pose of the character and gave him a different turntable.
    I put him in the Unreal Engine to have real-time lighting.



     
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