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  • He looks pretty solid to me so far!  Keep it up!
  • Slow progress...started blocking in her outfit.
  • Tits said:  I do think that camel toe is a bit much tho, its not even a bit subtle, thats one very deep calmel toe and it doesnt look very natural, she aldready is a very sexy character, I don't believe you need to over do it with that kind of…
  • I dig A but I almost feel like she should have 2 of them.
  • The facial structure looked a bit off in the sculpt but seems to look better in the textured version so that's good.  Hair cards look good so far.  Maybe give it a bit more volume as it looks really flat to her head right now.  Really nice though...…
  • This looks good so far!  I've never watched this anime but it feels like her legs could be longer.  Her fingers also look crazy small....maybe her feet are too small as well.  I assume it's the style but her head reads as a tad large.  Really love t…
  • To be honest, I think you would have been better off with either a unique design of your own or a concept no one has done as that would stand out much more and be unique to you.  But, to each his own.  This looks great so I'm not criticizing the art…
  • Hey Jakub, I'm just curious why you chose to do Atoq?  He's not the most compelling character design and he was also Naughty Dog's art test for a long time which means there are a lot of Atoqs out there.  Admittedly, myself included.  I would think …
  • For detail, if you want to you can add it to the highres for fun but I think it's easier to just add it in Substance later.
  • Thanks guys!  I started messing with the hair a bit.  I'm not sure I like it yet.  I want to try stylizing it a little and adding the braids to see if it works better.
  • So to be honest, I didn't really click on any of them.  Not that they didn't look good but being hand painted and rather simple, you get a pretty good luck at it in the thumbnail.  Most of your stuff feels very simple and therefore not compelling en…
  • The point at the top of his head is way too pronounced.
  • Diggin the approach and the anatomy looks good!
  • Hey Jakub, this looks really nice so far.  I would make his head more ethnic personally.  Right now, it looks pretty caucasian to me.  Atoq is South American so that's a good place to start.  As for the shirt, I agree about the folds striating from …
  • This looks really nice and very true to the concept!
  • @Edrice: I agree it looks more Aloy but it just strays too far from OW for my personal preferences.  Gonna have to balance it more. @Archsider:  I agree, the droopiness is probably too much. @Jakub: Thanks man, I think I found the sweet spot so pr…
  • Really nice!  
  • So I tried making some quick adjustments to her face to try and capture Aloy a bit better.  I'm a little concerned that she really starts to lose the overwatch face quickly.  I will have to balance it somehow...
  • @Edrice: yea, the eye shape thing I have tried.  having it droop just looked bad for some reason.  I'll give it a shot when I try to infuse more of Aloy's look again but for now, I'm focusing on making her look appealing as that is proving challengi…
  • @aaronhiggins: totally agree with you man.  my first goal is to create an appealing female face in overwatch style which is difficult in its own right.  then i want to try to push it more towards Aloy's actual look.  so definitely something I want t…
  • @RocketBrian: I've actually been comparing my proportions to DVA and Mercy 1:1 so this is pretty close as is.  I haven't really compared to Tracer to be honest but I could try that too.  I'll definitely end up playing with proportions more I'm sure.…
  • You have to do an art test to go to school?  I get having to have a portfolio but an art test?  that sounds kind of ridiculous to me.  I mean, that's worse than doing an art test for a job lol.  The work looks great btw!  I hope you get in.  Do you …
  • why not just try it instead of asking about it?  
  • thanks BarOn!  The hair will be a challenge for sure.  Started some doodling on her head/shirt concept.
  • @stickadtroja: could be getting blocked by your provider.  or if ur viewing from work, they might be blocking it.   So, worked on her face a bit more this morning and I feel like I did more good in 15 minutes than I did in 2 hours last night lol.  …
  • Thanks guys.  This is going to be tough.  Been studying a ton of overwatch characters and I am struggling!  Getting closer but still so far!!!
  • I'm a little late to the party but I think there are some issues with the design...mainly that it's too busy in the textured version IMO.  The highlight red lines are EVERYWHERE.  There are no areas of rest or focus.  Plus you want the accent color …
  • @JordanN:  I think the implication is you just finished saying you draw tons of stuff for your modeling by hand and then posted a drawing that was clearly not yours yet you failed to specify that.  Honest mistake...whatever, move on. As for OP, you…
  • sinnart said: slosh said: So, first off, dump the reel.  For character art, this is an extremely useless way to show off your art.  Just have a website with nice high res renders, wireframes, textures, and a marmoset viewer file or ske…
  • So, first off, dump the reel.  For character art, this is an extremely useless way to show off your art.  Just have a website with nice high res renders, wireframes, textures, and a marmoset viewer file or sketchfab to show off the model.  As for th…
  • So the hair cards are already placed on the head then I assume?
  • Rodrigo, that makes a lot of sense!  Definitely a lot of ways to do stuff with character art and there is certainly no right or wrong.  All that matters is the final product looks great and you have done that!
  • Dudestein said: http://yourcreativepush.com/2017/05/interview-with-shane-madden/ "The reality is, if you're just going to post your stuff on ArtStation and you give somebody a link and say 'hey, go check out my work on ArtStation!' what you're…
  • This turned out really nice man!  Did you do all your texturing in zbrush?  The tattoo looks like something you could do very easily in Substance Painter for example.  Either way, fantastic results!
  • You know what, I don't know how common this will be but I'm pretty sure my company blocked all your images.  I can load your site fine on my phone but when I tried to look at it at work, I don't see any thumbnails or any images.  Something to keep i…
  • I tried your personal site and got the splash page but none of the links worked.  Couldn't see any of your work.
  • Hazardous said: I felt that the heights from which I look down upon everyone else are not accurately represented in these choices. Although far beneath what could hardly describe my skill level, my choice of 'surpeme' will have to suffice. …
  • It's most definitely true but the best way to get a significant raise or promotion?  Change studios.
  • Kashaar said: Got mah hoodie from Teespring! No printing errors! Had to pick it up from customs, but didn't have to pay customs for it. Anyways, good shit. This thing is comfy af. No offense but that still looks pretty bad to me.  See…
  • Sexy AF
  • If the design is up for debate, i would love to have something on the front and back of a hoodie personally.  Maybe smaller greentooth on the front with "polycount" in text on the back.
  • This turned out great!  Probably one of the better takes on this concept that I have seen.  Nice job!  My main crit would be that her waist feels too thin.
  • Eric Chadwick said: I've pulled the clothing from the store. Only the mug is available now.  I'm really busy these days but I'll see if I can get a different on-demand printer up and running. Sorry for all the hassle people.  No worrie…
  • Alright, I think I'm done with Teespring.  Their quality blows.  I got a terrible print the first time so they said they would replace it.  Just got my second print and it looks EXACTLY the same as the first.  I'm not buying any polycount shirts til…
  • Yea same, my hoodie is being re-printed and sent out to me at no extra cost.  I guess we'll see how this one turns out.  I will probably wash it once I get it to see if it fades immediately.  If it does like someone mentioned, I will probably give u…
  • Yea, if you do it in Unreal, that's a bonus.  Marmoset TB3 is a great engine just for showing off pretty models as well.
  • Ok, here we go.  First off, if you want to do env art, that's all you want on your folio and it should be front and center.  If you are applying to for an env gig, don't even force someone to look at your splash page and accidentally go to your scul…
  • I think what I love most about the scifi art in this game is the balance in design.  A lot of other AAA studios doing scifi suits seem to just do absurd amounts of detail where your eyes just have no where to rest.  The MEA stuff has tons of microde…
  • Doesn't matter if its fanart or original art...if you do a stellar job, you're in good shape.  If fanart is what can motivate you to finish it to a high level, more power to ya.