[WIP] Lina, Sorceress Supreme
polycounter lvl 8
Working on a new character!
Critique and feedback is definitely welcome.
Current Progress:
COMPLETED!
Check out more at my artstation
Here's a quick idea of where I want to go with her.
Critique and feedback is definitely welcome.
Current Progress:
COMPLETED!
Check out more at my artstation
Here's a quick idea of where I want to go with her.
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I like how her face looks so far, but I might play around with making her feel a little older; more mature.
Feedback and critique would be appreciated!
This time I've blocked in her hair.
I also had some feedback on her face being a little too puffy and childish. There were also some proportion issues with her legs. So, I've shortened them a bit. I also shaved down her cheeks, accentuated her jawline, and sharpened her cheek bone to give her an older, more mature look. It's super subtle but I think it does the trick.
More costume and hair work to come!
@almighty_gir
Thanks for the specifics. It really helped. I went back and adjusted her face a bit and added a some of her cheek fat and changed up the angle of her jaw line to be a smoother. I also increased the size of her eyes and moved them closer together just a tad. The change is super subtle. I think I might need go back and make the change a little more obvious. For the nose, can you elaborate a little more when you mean it's "blocky"? Is the bridge too pronounced?
@jpr
Thanks! Looking back her ears do feel a bit on the larger size. I went back and shrunk them a bit. It won't really be seen because of her hair, but it helps me frame the rest of her face. Plus it's good practice
I would try and work on the face shape alittle more. I like the face on the right more. I would check out Hazardous character art. https://hazardousarts.deviantart.com/art/Cyber-Chun-Li-Wip-10-204578098
Yup Yup! Nine was a huge inspiration for the piece! I hope I've made her unique enough to stand on her own, but I'm totally down to make changes large and small to make her more interesting and different! Suggestions?
I love Haz's work. Big fan. I definitely have a long way to go!
@almighty_gir
Thanks, man! glad I'm progressing in the right direction. Now that you mention the nose, I can see how the nose would be off. I'll work to remedy that.
and Persona 4: Margaret. https://www.google.com/search?q=persona+4+margaret&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjZspDdtPXWAhWERyYKHb3BCYoQ_AUICigB&biw=2132&bih=1062#imgrc=4DBWMjxbacTinM:
For their body style. But one of the area where I think you can improve is the eyes. The eyes, in this case need to be more in the sexy appeal vs cute. I think this might help. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bXfuovBSEIU
Worked on her face a bit more. Reintroduced a bit of her jawline and fiddled with her eyes a bit more. Very subtle, but I hope its a noticeable change.
Made some significant changes to her designs. Most notable: her cape and gauntlet. I wanted to break her symmetrical silhouette a bit more. I also thought it would be neat to give her a magical focus for when she's casting or channeling energy. I'm thinking about giving her more knick-knacks like a spellbook or maybe a melee weapon to balance out her gear.
Finally done with sculpting. Moving onto retopo and UV's. Next update I'll have her maps baked and ready for texturing.
Between my part-time job and other projects I've finally gotten to texturing Lina.
This is my first attempts in substance painter and PBR in general. Such an awesome program. love it!
Been spending a great deal of time getting the skin looking good. Gave her some light make-up. I've been back and forth with her eyes, though.
Any tips would be awesome!
On another note, I just finished this project and you can see more of it in better quality at my Artstation
Any C&C would be awesome!