Cartoony_Octupus_(Zbrush)

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

Any suggestions, Critique welcome.

This is my Student-Project, its due this coming Monday.

We had to create a Octopus and that is where I'm at at this point.

Narlyteeth · Jan 2013

is this based on a concept design? maybe you should make some sketches of something cool! or put together a style sheet or something. modeling from the top of your head rarely gets amazing results.

also try not to tell people that it's your homework. unless you show more ambition, then call it a student project. calling it homework sounds like you are just making it for a cheap grade.

Brian "Panda" Choi · Jan 2013

I guess that's the funny part about art HW. It's between this fine line of "the public cares" and "the public doesn't."

Anyways, I think the basic shapes are okay, but since you've already pushed into color, it all feels a bit too flat still with the red hues. Mix it up! Add more hues, cheat shadows / lights. Think of it like a painting.

I'm also wondering if it is bad/good/intentional that you do not have the membrane between the legs.

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

JadeEyePanda wrote: »

I guess that's the funny part about art HW. It's between this fine line of "the public cares" and "the public doesn't."

Anyways, I think the basic shapes are okay, but since you've already pushed into color, it all feels a bit too flat still with the red hues. Mix it up! Add more hues, cheat shadows / lights. Think of it like a painting.

I'm also wondering if it is bad/good/intentional that you do not have the membrane between the legs.

"It was intentional"

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

Update on Octopus!!!

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

Any critique?

Brian "Panda" Choi · Jan 2013

AGGH!!! Colors everywhere! I like it!

Can we get a wider shot?

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

Here is the wider shot!!!:poly121:

Benton · Jan 2013

Damn, it looks good!

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

Thanks

Brian "Panda" Choi · Jan 2013

Just retopo it to a level that you want this to be at, texture, and should be done I suppose.

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

I thinking about coloring the eyes in the different color / more natural color, should I just leave it like it is right now or change the eyes completly in its color?

Suggestions and critique always welcome

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

Created a Cartoony Monster Overnight!!!:)

Now I'm sleepy. Good Night:)

Critique welcome

JGreentheRookie · Jan 2013

Update

Cartoony_Octupus_(Zbrush)

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