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i ve been wrkn on a video on f1.. nd i came up with dis output.. just a sample of wat m into.. still hve to cmplete the whole thng..


[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wdvu-_BJtA4[/ame]

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  • n88tr
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    without the side view of the wheels moving I thought the cars were sliding on the track or like gliding. the lighting is direct and overpowering and unrealistic. Maybe you need more light sources to make it more believable, I don't know what the fix would be specifically. the surroudning textures ie ground, grass, stands leave much to be imagined... very bland. it's a nice timeline of animation all that aside.
  • Taylor Hood
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    Hey, have you noticed why people aren't replying to your thread?
    Maybe you can try and talk properly and people will take you seriously?
    Also, give more than a sentence of information about what you are showcasing.
    Also... most people here are 3D Artist and a fast moving video isn't going to give them any information. What they need is the Specs of the model...

    Good luck.


    Edit - Never mind the first part. Someone replied before me. Now I just sound harsh :D
  • MatthewS
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    Maybe you can try and talk properly and people will take you seriously?
    MFEQB.jpg

    All in all the work isn't too bad... could use some more action tho... and backstory.
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