A Payphone

Pancakes

Hello, it's a simple payphone. But I feel something is not right. Can you critique? Maybe I got the scale wrong somewhere. I'm going to keep thinking on it.

Selaznog

Well for one thing, it will look a lot better with textures. But most importantly I think the papers you have maybe have too many polys? They also all seem to be the same. The bottom paper strips can also be achieved with just a plane, and then leave the divisions of the strips up to the alpha :P

Pancakes

I think I figured it out, the chord is too short. And I'm gonna change the shape of the booth to be something more stylized I suppose.

vvheris

maybe you should add smoothing groups and render with ambient occlusion, would be easier to see problems when there is still no textures