Falcon Gun (Mass Effect)

iniside

5144 tris. 2x2048 (normal and diffuse), 1x1024(spec)

Hopefully I improved from last time.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2Nv33omK0E"]Rotating Gun - YouTube[/ame]

odium

I agree on the colour... In fact, on the entire texture. It reminds me of Gears Of War 1, how it had that same bloody detail texture over everything that made every surface look like it was made of the same concrete...

So much so, that I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say that you couldn't have started the texture proper yet?

Seirei

Basicly just what the others already said.

Take a look at the colors on the original, you should definetly add that little glowing bit.


Also a wireframe would be nice to see!

iniside

Sorry for no wires, but... Files where I have finished version are damaged ;s. Yes all of them.. And Im left with unoptimized geometry and the one I exported to CryEngine.

Here is more colored version:


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Spec:

Amadreaus

Pretty sweet that it's in Cryengine and everything. I like it all, really, but your UV layout is quite wasteful.

Snader

Why is the thumbhole only 8 sided? It's easily the most blocky part of the thing. Yout painting needs to be tighter too, especially those rows of white dots are sloppy.

Also, your model only has 2 materials: black plastic and white metal (but with too little spec). The concept also has black metal, on the barrel.

iniside

Update:
I redone UV maping, and texture from scratch. I also reduced tri count to 4300.
[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZZqYmvdSt4"]Rotating Gun - CryEngine 3 - YouTube[/ame]



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