Female Hunter

Ra6ga5ka

Hey there,
Its my first Post on Polycount.com, so i dont know how it works.
I want to show u my new Model, the female Hunter.
At this time she have 8.665 Verts with the bow and the arrows.



at this time the Model have only a Normal- , Alpha- and Diffuse-map with AO and some fake GI
the colored diffuse, spec, and gloss map follow in some days

Thanks for some critique

Rob

disanski

Hey Rob Welcome to polycount.
This is an awesome first post man. I cant see her face very well from those shots but everything looks very clean and proportions are great too.

passerby

great porptions and nice style. Will you be doing a LP and texture for this one?

Ra6ga5ka

Hey there here is a Picture of the Face:

LP ?
and u mean if a do a colored texture?
i want to add a Color, and Specular texture to this

Kot_Leopold

rschmidt wrote: »

Hey there here is a Picture of the Face:
http://imageshack.us/f/407/hunterface.jpg/
LP ?
and u mean if a do a colored texture?
i want to add a Color, and Specular texture to this

LP stands for low-poly aka game-rez version of the character.

Ra6ga5ka

ah ok i think it is a "Low Poly", the Highpoly have 5 million vertices. Maybe i can try to do some LODs. it was only for a showcast but i think this would be a nice training, i keept this in mind.

Goeddy

lp is nice and shit, but were are the wires? cmon feed us

also maby use that embed image function, imageshack ads are kinda anoying

PaulP

Looks good, I especially like the bow design. Two minor crits, I think the arms look a bit weedy for an archer, and the bottom of the cape could use some seam to show where the material folds over, or you could later just use an alpha to create a frayed look?

Ra6ga5ka

thanks for the critique i had the arms much more thick but it looks to male for my flavor. I try to optimize it and i allways look for new ways to do it better without breakdown my imagine of that charakter...

haikai

Some nice stuff going on here! I think the weakest parts are the cloth wrinkles. They're kind of lumpy and don't feel quite natural. Good realism on the rest though.

Hayden Zammit

Don't know much about making characters, but I think the folds in the cape and on the front clothing look very blobby. The ones on the front in particular also look like they have no weight to them.

Hope that helps.

Ra6ga5ka

Hey there i finished the Textures now... here is the final result. maybe i will do some LODs and some Rigging and skinning stuff (only to pose her) and render a turntable

PaulP

The textures are looking good. Her left eye looks a bit googly though. Also her hair is clipping with the robe

David-J

Looking good. I'm really digging the bow. Polish a bit more the face texture. Add more detail, make it more unique. Also pick a cool pose for the character.

Ra6ga5ka

thanks for the critiques they helped me a lot to see more porblems.. ^^ or to much problems.. i going to fix the problems which are in my budget and pose her.

Ra6ga5ka

finaly the turntable

http://youtu.be/Tpb5QS-4EOM

thanks

PaulP

Looking good, nice work. One thing I noticed in the turntable is that her right arm looks weirdly bent between the shoulder and elbow. You can see it in the first frame.

Drav

Why would you wear a ridiculous collection of childrens belts around your thighs?

Congrats on the top, she looks like a hunter, but the pants and the belts ruin it for me. She looks like shes got out of bed in a hurry and forgotten her dress or shorts or something!

Ra6ga5ka

i Think ur right because my gilfrind told me the same.
I have build up the Model that i can chang her cloth without touching the uperbody or the cape.
i can change her cloth if i have time and want to.

PaulP

you could always keep a couple of belts and use them to hold a knife sheath (or whatever else, e.g. biscuit pouch?)

dirigible

Hunting in a corset can't be easy.

Your bow is really really nice, but the character just isn't at the same level. Her textures feel blurry and a lot of the sculpting looks lumpy. As far as her body is concerned, I think the only problem is that her face is a little off.

Ra6ga5ka

thx for the critics. and thx dirigible for your discription but it was my first female charakter and i wanted to show much skin and tight cloth. my next female charakter or cloth going to be more realistic.