Bobenlik

makecg

I was given permission to model this character. Concept is done by Mike Corriero. I talk to him sometimes on vent. http://cghub.com/images/view/26254/

It is for a portfolio piece I hope it turns out good.
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makecg

brought it into zbrush going to be exploring it a bit.

Alberto Rdrgz

Makecg: your new avatar is in my lungs at this moment... brb.... it was...

EDIT: Ehhh! um, this is looking awesome~! fucking modeling this thing beast mode style!!

makecg

stop smoking my face ALBERTO !

Lord McMutton

Looks good. Before realizing that that thing was the base of its tail, I thought it had a rocket booster on its ass.

makecg

haha. yea that is the opening I have to model the tail, and alot more things like fur-
moar

MM

i dont think the wings are supposed to be all flat. look up other dragon statues to see how the wings have a 3d curve to it.

http://www.actionfigurearchive.co.uk/ekmps/shops/carpetmonster/images/beowulf-dragon-action-figure-758-p.jpg

also the hip and the waist are too wide i think.

makecg

Thanks MM. I agree about the wings I went in and adjusted them a bit more. First time doing wings like this. They still need alot more work.. and looking at the concept I think it still has some proportion issues.

Mstankow

That's some dangerous prolapse right there.

Timeyy

looks like Goatse...

I'm sorry

makecg

Timeyy wrote: »

looks like Goatse...

I'm sorry

Hopefully doesn't look that way when I complete it.

Timeyy

I was referring to huge hole in his ass, just in case you thought I was dissing the quality of your work, which I like very much actually.

makecg

don't worry I didn't think that ! haha Kind of does it will be better when I add the tail to it

thanks

Daven

I think the neck needs to be longer and it needs less muscle definition (if you're staying true to concept, otherwise spice it up a bit). Pretty sweet so far.

ceebee

Those gigantic traps going into those skinny wing arms look really strange. Shrink the traps, it just appears they're large in the concept because they have hair overhanging the collarbones.

makecg

Thanks ceebee I did some proportion changes

Wings look better lowered?



here is what it looks like above



made legs a bit more smaller too

makecg

what looks better ?

Alberto Rdrgz

Raised I'd say, looks more anatomically correct. My current crit is the lack of to the wings. Maybe some more details like veins.

makecg

Thanks. Okay guys I cant do anymore work on this character. My computer has broke some kind of virus that is restarting my computer I cant even get on it. I am writing this from my phone. So I guess thats it till I can fix it..

edit*
Fixed my computer problems it was really annoying me the whole day.

- Alberto Rdrgz
yes you are right. I plan on retoplogizing some of it So I can connect the tail and stuff. I will do major details when I retop some of it.

makecg

Torch

Its looking cool, but howcome you put a fist on the end of his tail? I think it would be better just to stick to the original concept.

EDIT: At least if any enemies try to attack it from behind, it can just slap them away

Jessica Dinh

hahhahah yeahh, that looks really funny xD xD

Nemlet17

That's a very interesting spin on the concept art, Lance...hah...a fist....

makecg

The fist is a joke guys the tail isn't going to look like that lol.

- Some work on the back fur. I will probably try to retop / add the 'real' tail tomorrow.

Baddcog

Looks pretty cool, the hips area and tail seem very wide to me though

makecg

thanks
still alot of detailing to do - i am not liking the hair so I have to figure that out.

progress

makecg

shot from maya thinking about modeling strands of hair instead of a solid block of it.. to give more control maybe.

also at the end of the tail i'm not sure about those balls and thing yet