Outsider Shotgun

aaronmwolford

Hey everyone, new project underway. Wanted to get some comments and crits. Looking to improve my hard surface modeling

Thanks!

Cooljay

Feels way too blocky for Hi Poly. Can I see some wireframes ?

AnimeAngel

hard to really see the models, to much of the same gray. need better renders and more angles of each.

aaronmwolford

yea sorry about that cooljay the top ribbed piece and the piece below it that has open faces are both low poly right now. ill post some wires soon.

Cooljay

Sounds good to me

aaronmwolford

Much better.

Cooljay

Yeah this looks interesting overall. Once you get some textures on it will look even nicer.

aaronmwolford

thanks. yea there is a lot more modeling to go into it. I'll post some updates soon.

Cooljay

Keep it up for sure. This is turning out well so far.

System

Looks like your edges are too hard, especially on the stock. There are a few creases too. On the other hand the grips are too soft and look strange where they are supposed to attach.

aaronmwolford

thanks GCMP. ill take a lot at that asap. The stock needs a lot of love and I have some missing pieces that go on the stock as well. Updates soon.