Gemini Demons

TortillaChips

So we have to do a 'Dominance War'-esque competition which follow the same sort of rules and limitations as the previous Dom War. My project idea for this is to do these twin demons. At the moment though they look naff, so I'd really like some crits and how to improve on what I've got so far .

Concept:


Head sculpts:




Torso Sculpts:



Low Poly Armour and improved proportions:



As you can see, I've sort of done a bit of everything... I've been changing the torso parts around a bit in the Low Pollies so I'll prolly have to do a lot of fiddling/redo the torso sculpts.

Thanks

TortillaChips

Been working on the high poly stuff for the characters. Still need to work on the shoulders, gauntlets, then all the little titbits to add on.

TortillaChips

Been working on this armour texture but I'm not sure about the colour..

Here it is normally:



Testing green+silver:

Melonman

I would work allot more on the proportions first before getting too much into the texturing stage.
You said at the start that your concept was a bit naff?

In my opinion then probably best to work more on the concept so you know what you want out of your model detail wise. As you have already modelled a base mesh why not take the opportunity to do a paintover to see where your gonna take this.

Deffo work on the proportions more if you can and have time because atm I think some parts of your models need tweaking.

Hope this helps and keep at it.

TortillaChips

I only have till friday I'll try and make some ajustments to the proportions if I have time to spare, any preferences? Apart from the giant goalie gloves on the female.

TortillaChips

Hey, felt I should post these up and finish off this thread since the assignment time is up. I feel that the normal map is a bit redundant in this! I've improved on my texturing a fair bit and I hope to reach a first for this assignment . If you're wondering about the Dominance War IV tag, it's because it's a requirement to include the name that you have chosen to base your challenge from for your assignment on the presentation sheets.






Edit: By the way does anyone know how to get alpha planes to look right in Marmoset? It's probably just my texturing..