:: Penthouse Building ::

pliang

Did some updates in a day, still not happy with background color and light source. Tried tinkering with one light casting on the scene.

It's for a little archviz project.

n88tr

The car ruins the scene imo. So many jaggy lines on it and the shadows look off. Otherwise I like it but without the car there is no focal point for me to look at and say "wow my eye is drawn to that!"

ArcticNova83

Agreed, it's right there in the golden sweet spot, too. It draws away too much focus. Lose it.

Willburforce

eh? Control your eyeballs then :poly115:

Nice renders... car looks nice but could be better half out of shot.

Where is the jacuzzi? What kind of penthouse IS this?!
There is no pent to your house?

roosterMAP

car is too saturated wth color for it to look real.

rumblesushi

Slick work, car looks a bit out of place as stated, but the main thing is, it looks nothing like a penthouse, looks like a cheap apartment block