quick likeness - Wendy

dabu

doing for a class demo over at Gamestepper...

Still not quite getting the look of the model, really like the 3/4 view... perhaps adding in the hair bits in the back will help balance it out...

http://gamestepper.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3728

achillesian

not chubby enough, or shiny enough, looks too perfect, besides the hair. Highlight the imperfections and you'll get a better likeness, i think...

dabu

thanks man, I updated after getting in there a bit more. Can someone kindly remind me how to link images in directly? http://gamestepper.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=31546&d=1256685480

jakelear

May be wise to just re-post the images here, as opposed to redirecting viewers to a different, and possibly unfamiliar forum.

Where are the images hosted? You can use the image button or manual image tags

DoomiVox

where the crease of the lips meets the cheeks needs to be pushed forward/out a little more. her face is a little bit fuller there than whats on the model.
otherwise, i really like the clean and simple texturing job and that you're not covering it useless detail that reads badly even at a slight distance (which i see ALOT, due to a lot of modelers using the "it can be done, so we should" mentality or what i like to call "bluray-ism").
sorry, i digress a lot.

dabu

thanks for the feedback, Ill look at the face shape some more. going for last gen spec on this one. I do feel I could add some noise and imperfections though. More in a bit...

Gamestepper allows you to host your images on their server for free, so I was hoping to just link to the image file instead of laboriously putting it on an ftp. Their site uses lightbox though, so that might be the problem...

Do the links work as intended? Should just open an image, but wish I could embed with

dabu

well, couldn't help myself. Gonna add a fedora and change the boots to heels with warmers over them.

http://gamestepper.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=31844&d=1257211547

and the dress:

http://gamestepper.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=31847&d=1257211572