Bandit character wip

Alex Pointer

Hey everyone, this is a w.i.p. that im hoping to get some feedback on. As of right now i'm just working on the high poly but I am going to take this project all the way to the animation stage for a game. I'll be updating my progress every week. I look forward to hearing your comments!!

Alex Pointer

Alex Pointer

full body, this is a perspective shot

Alex Pointer

Alex Pointer

If anyone would like closer shots of areas let me know.. Thanks in advance for the feedback!

mikezoo

wow this is looking pretty good! On thing i have to say is the prespective/porptions looks a little off. I dont know if that really is the case as your screenshots are in zbrush and you could have the camera set that way.
One other thing: How did you model your wrinkles/folds. There looking good! Sculpted in zbrush or modeled in your mesh?

keep it going!!

Harry

pistols are ridiculously tiny

byder

The cloth folds and wrinkles are looking great too

butt_sahib

Everything looks great, but you definitely need to check out the proportions. Arms are short, hips too wide, torso too small length-wise,groin too high,etc IMHO.

JohnnyRaptor

+ arms too short and feet too small from those angles,

timwiese

Hey Alex, looking pretty good so far! I really like the folds, they read very well, pinching and stretching at all the right points.

I have to echo what others have said though about the proportions. They are bit wonky at the moment.

BradMyers82

Really nice work! I also agree with what others are saying, but to add to it; I think you might wanna rotate the foot about 5 degree's so its not turned in like that. It's really nit picking though, so again... well done.

Alex Pointer

mikezoo wrote: »

wow this is looking pretty good! On thing i have to say is the prespective/porptions looks a little off. I dont know if that really is the case as your screenshots are in zbrush and you could have the camera set that way.
One other thing: How did you model your wrinkles/folds. There looking good! Sculpted in zbrush or modeled in your mesh?

keep it going!!

For this one my poly flow is basic, for the low poly i'll add flow with the wrinkles but I did all of them in zbrush using a brush with a stroke set to lazy mouse. To transition out of wrinkles I would just go in after the wrinkle was made and smooth it out with a smoothing setting of like 10ish.

Alex Pointer

BradMyers82 wrote: »

Really nice work! I also agree with what others are saying, but to add to it; I think you might wanna rotate the foot about 5 degree's so its not turned in like that. It's really nit picking though, so again... well done.

yea I see what you mean, thanks for pointing that out. i'll adjust it a little.thanks

Alex Pointer

thanks for all the replys! I'll work on these proportions, and update a new post later and not use perspective.

Alex Pointer

heres a sceengrab, I used vitruvian man as a ref. to fix proportions. I didn't realize how far off i was. just user view and not in perspective. Still need to rotate the boots outward, enlarge them, lower the crotch some more,the fingers seem to be a little too thick also.

JohnnyRaptor

id suggest perhaps checking out the demosoldier.ztl that comes with zbrush3 and check out the proportions.