DWIII - 3D - Levus - Corn Fear

Levus

That's my first steps on the board, so i wanna say HELLO to everyone!:)

War is a good reason to start posting here. And a good reason to make cool character:)

And this is my entry, concept its still a wip,needs some more work on it.
So, any C&C is very very welcome.

The name is Corn Fear, Stalker from the Darkness!
Feel the fear.

rollin

like it

welcome here at polycount!

slosh

wow, great concept! looks solid. i guess his artifact does vegetation...

Blackheart

awesome concept man, his looking mean, great job on the paint over, cant wait to see this in 3d

Arix

Yes very nice rendered color work. What is his class and artifact? Slosh mentioned Vegetation...Looks like summoning perhaps with his crow? The Photoshop textural detail you included will definitely help with the 3D process. Welcome to Polycount! I'm new as well. Keep up the great work!

Levus

Thanks so much!

About the class of weapon, its a good suggestion with the vegetation class, thanks. However, I planned to show that it is a darkness scythe. I will work on it to show the rigth effect. Probably through adding some dark souls or something flying around the blade;) And some more creepy detail.

Corn Fear appears in the shadow, the victim hears a rattle of chains and see green light points. And then the Fear cut their head off and take their soul:)

Concept update soon!

Por@szek

Kicking butt mate
As i said U before, crow is summoner , reaper is a pet, haha.
Now put ur hands on modeling and do some work buddy

soda

Nice one:] Realy like it. Keep going!

Bone

I really love the colours on this

Levus

Poraszek, soda, thx zioms!;)
True, i can't wait to get into zbrushing:p

Bone, thx too! My pleasure!

Levus

Arix, thx for idea with texturing, its helpfull!

Ok, a just a little update.
I heared suggestion from my friend about the eyes, so I reworked them.. i choose 3, but it nice to read what you thinking about others versions..

About the artifact class, I decided its darkness, capturing souls of Fear victims. The crow is integral part of character (a multicharacter?), he wasn't summoned, he following with Fear always and everywhere.
(I think its consistent with the War brief?)

And hows looking new amulet? Better?

update:

JFletcher

shit, that is so damn cool!

face looks damn creepy, cant wait to see the 3d!

rollin

ghost sense !! how cool?!?

guess the 2. eyes are the most scary ones

keep on

soda

Awsome work Man:]

Mongrelman

Great stuff.

I think the scythe could do with some curviness to it though, to make it more interesting.

BlackB

PIMP!!!!
haha i like the #3 eyes

cMac

If your modeling skill is as good as 2d I am bit afraid...
You could aply for 2d trphy as well.

Levus

JFletcher->thank you!

rollin->thx for the feedback, however from the sugestion of some more peoples, i get "3". And maybe some tweaking in 3d with the eyes.

soda->thank you!

Mongrelman->very thx for the good idea, I've added some work to the scythe. I'm still working on it.

BlackB->hehe, I've heard same thing from my buddy;)

cMac->nice to hear that, thanks:) I'm afraid, that I don't get too much time to work with another...

Ok, the next update, previous version of amulet backs with a little tweaking:) Longer fingers a little, and some fun with scythe, it is a little bigger right now.
I'm waiting for any feedback from you all, what can I do with this creepy guy to bring it more impressive!

slosh

man, great lookin concept. it hink u could go even crazier with the curve in the scythe...might as well really torque it out!

Levus

slosh, thank you! I do some tweak with the scythe in modeling I suppose..

I do some improvements, I think its final image, and I maybe do some freestyle tweaks to it in modeling work.
So, It's time to get some polys now..

Por@szek

Love it mate. Now stop pimping ur concept and start 3d buddy
Can't w8 to see first shots

Levus

Porasz, as you wish man!
I've started doin' base mesh for zbrushing:p
And now I'm going to sleep:/
Why humans must sleep?!

Jaco

Nice concept and it's looking like a good start.
Sleep is for the weak! (It’s 3 in the morning over here )

Cody

Whoa.

Levus

Thank you guys!

Here is update. I'm going with quads only for zbrushing.
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ETA

Look realy nice, I'm waiting for sculpting :P

Wells

he's coming off as rather boxy. 'specially the top of his pants and stomach area. probably shouldn't matter overly much for sculpting, though...

Jaco

Looks like a good base, I'd put some more loops around the bottom of his cloak. And in the face, but you’re probably still busy with that.

Levus

ETA->be patience friend;)

Sectaurs->I'm appreciate your feedback, I get some more shape from it now.

Jaco->thats right, I've done some work with those areas. And still working on it, the face especially.

I've done some dividing tests in zbrush, and mesh still some work to good divide. However, the retopology tool give me some help if I need it with sculp.
So, a little up to date:

auburenite

It's probably too late but I just wanted to say that I really like the decision you made with the eyes. Seeing the pupils makes him look intelligent like he's able to think and plan his kills. Great job keep it up!

Levus

Auburenite->thank you, I appreciate your feedback anyway:)

Here an idea: how about the hairs? I like it, he looks more dreadfully for me.. What do you think?

Levus

Hello:)

Here is update, some working on general shape.
It's almost ready for sculpting..

soda

Lewus mayby yelow hair will be better??

Rick Stirling

Yum! Silo?

Levus

Soda-> I thinking about thin black hairs. Or dreadlocks maybe...?

Rick_Stirling-> Nope:p 3ds, yellow material:)

rollin

hair and amulet are cool!

Levus

Thx rollin!

Ok, one more update:

Smooth_Criminal

Nice base, looking foward to see it proceed

Levus

Hi again!

Smooth_Criminal->thx!

Here is some sculpting work. I suppose it need some work on general shape because I'm still don't satisfied with it.

Slingshot

Looking good. only critique I have to give is to try and make his sleeves on his arms hang down more, they look too tube like,
more gravity on the cloth. Other than that I cant wait to see this beast textured.

dupikus

sehr gut mein freund, nagraj video jak bedziesz robil model
low poly ;P
czemu twoj sculpt jest taki jakby hmm bablowaty?

Ged

looks good, in terms of anatomy the thumbs seem to start at the same level as all the other fingers on the hand when really they should be a bit lower and at a slightly different angle? make the same shape with your hand and copy it, thats what I do :P.

Levus

Slingshot->thx for feedback! I will do something with this, to keep clothes more realistic.

Dupikus->Zdrastwujtie! Qe pasa amigo!? Ich nicht verstehe deutch!:) ja wiem czemu? Jak Ci chodzi o kropki na plaszczu to szybkie ruchy byly. Czy o material Tak jak Ci napisalem, jak poradze na screencapa cos to nagram. pzdr!

Ged->thx for the crit, you have right, I will fix it.

Levus

I've done some sculpting upgrade with your crit guys, thx for this!

danpants

This one of my favorites here. Glad you are working on the shape seems to doll shape. Keep up the good work.

Levus

Thank you danpants!

Next update, done some work with hands, chest, added bones..
I can't stop to do render:p

Jaco

Looking good, you could maybe do some more folds on the pants.
Nice material.

Levus

Jaco, the pants do a lot of controversy in my environment, so I leave it for a now..

Zbrush material - its Guti Skin, if I remember probably, I get it from zbc.

Some upgrade here, the seams on cloak are for test, I will make it on texture, they have too much geometry right now.

Joao Sapiro

that fucking rules man!

rollin

thats a nice update

crit so far:
the folds on the trouser fight a bit against the idear of the material and the folds on the hat are too many and too soft

Rick Stirling

That's exceptionally creepy!