LPC #05 - jerry - Elite
Hi,
I'm currently working on a model of a halo 1/2/3 Elite. I hope this model is ok because i think Elite's in halo 3 are costumisable (not sure, haven't played yet).
So anyway, i'm posting the model in this early stage is because i feel like i need some crits. I can make better models than this so don't worry yet. I'm open to any critique you can come up with at this moment. I would like some specific tips on the "fingers",the "shields" he carries on his tighs and the feet.
EDIT:
Ok So i worked on it some more. I didn't want to shamelessly bump my thread (yet) so i'm editing it in. Still looking for crits though!
Old Image.
Jerry
I'm currently working on a model of a halo 1/2/3 Elite. I hope this model is ok because i think Elite's in halo 3 are costumisable (not sure, haven't played yet).
So anyway, i'm posting the model in this early stage is because i feel like i need some crits. I can make better models than this so don't worry yet. I'm open to any critique you can come up with at this moment. I would like some specific tips on the "fingers",the "shields" he carries on his tighs and the feet.
EDIT:
Ok So i worked on it some more. I didn't want to shamelessly bump my thread (yet) so i'm editing it in. Still looking for crits though!
Old Image.
Jerry
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would be great to get some last crits before unwrapping tomorrow.
Jerry
I would suggest that maybe his lower legs should kick back a little further, you can kinda see what I mean on this crappy toy.
And where are the mandibles? There must be mandibles!
I'm in the process of posing the guy. Since i'm having trouble doing that, i thought i'd show the result already. The back is totally made up but who cares
sonofrock, i didn't make the changes to his legs, it was a bit to late, i did give him the mandibles though. Too bad there's some issues in the gif i didn't really have in the viewport. Oh well, ill sort that later.
Update soon i hope.
Jerry.
now get him in a dynamic pose ^^
Final:
The rest is in the submission thread. Good to actually finish something which i'm even fairly proud of
Jerry.
I went with the full black because i actially tried hilighting the black but is came out brown and very bad looking. I would've liked to give it some more volume. Maybe i could get away with using a very dark grey without hilights i haven't tried that. Any tips on this are welcome, although it is posted in the final thread.
Jerry.