Girl with goggles

Dr_Graevling

Yeah, new member here. Hello hello everyone.

Aaaanyway, concept:


Model:


Still pretty rough (yes, the skinning is terrible in places), so suggestions and stuff would be nice. Going to start working on her weapon as well. Can't leave that one out.

Jesse Moody

Looking good so far but you've definetly got to give her a "TRAMP STAMP".

I would also say work on that hair.

StrangeFate

she's lovely

Jeremy Lindstrom

wires?

Rick Stirling

Why is she only wearing pants? Why no trousers?

Style decisions aside, she has no groin.

ElysiumGX

I'm posting in your thread because that girl is showing her undies.

conte

what a sexy lady!!!
i love her face and underpants=))))

Dr_Graevling

Thanks for the feedback. I'll rework the hair and see what I can do about her groin.
And yeah, here's a wire:


Sorry about her being triangulated. Maybe I'll get another shot with her still retaining her quads if you want to see.
She's freakishly high-poly. 6596 tris.

arshlevon

i really love the porportions on this.. i think the hair could use some work.. never been a fan of plane hair. if you look at some real hair it is made up of volumes. the overlapping planes approach just looks like some bent cardboard with stripes painted on it.

Xenobond

Hmm... those goggles aren't very sexy though. The proportions of it in the concept look nice though. Try and get it to match that more.

FightingChance

I would also be interested in seeing the quad layout.

I like the concept, perhaps some more gadgets are in order. (and a splash of a third color)

Dr_Graevling

Sat down with her a little this weekend and gave her a new do.


I hope it looks better than the planes.

EarthQuake

i think the main problem with the hair is that it comes off as very flat, this is usually the hardest thing to deal with when trying to do plane hair.

Ramucho

Quoting that evil norVAGINAn XD

As Eq said the hair looks flat I also think she looks a little bit inexpressive in the last screens you posted.

also use a bettre light rig since th=o soft those hard shadows and keep pushing the texture

looks pretty good otherwise!

Miguelito

i love her belly!!

Joel Huenink

I'm not sure if it's the lighting or smoothing groups, but I see some strange crunching going on by her ass to leg seam. You might consider rounding her ass out a bit more and spend a few more polygons on it (considering how dense other areas of the mesh are), or fix that lighting somehow, it is a focal point.