sumea entry AND MOAR

aniceto · Oct 2006

crits please kthx

all maps are 1024x1024

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/acilia_wire.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/polmonsad.jpg

here's an early WIP shot and the high poly
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/d4945532.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/99bf4169.jpg

this is based on someone else's concept, cant remember who. yell if you know

argh! gotta stop modelling perfectly parallel feet

this is a char i started since the comp ended. i like his chunkyness
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/8b87103a.jpg

ill keep this thread updated

Vitor · Oct 2006

Great work Aniceto

Love the girl! The skin is really good.

The last one is also great, nice concept!

No critics from me now...

firestarter · Oct 2006

This is some nice stuff, loving the details, the spaceygirl looks like it will be very cool.
The warrior girl, she has very under developed calf muscles, but then she looks a little under undernourished all over, so possibly intended?
The low res could use some extra work, too many straight lines there, give it some more fluidity and organic flow.
Good luck with your entries.
+ The realism in her face could be upped a little, to me it`s lagging behind a little.

Wells · Oct 2006

yar, her proportions seem a bit odd... tiny legs, plus where her skirt is, makes her look like she's got long monkey arms.

scale her feet/calves up a bit and you'll have a great, great model.

retleks · Oct 2006

I did them all a lot. I agree with Firestarter on the low res. Seems like with all of those polys you could push forms a little more, esp the forearms/lower legs, they just seem very straight and non dynamic. I do love that her face isn't generic. Keep it up, can't wait to see the other two come along.

character · Oct 2006

she's beautiful. i really dig the model. i would've liked it more if the normal map pushed the straps around her calves more to really give 'em some depth. other than that, good job

ebagg · Oct 2006

All top notch dude, finish the sci fi chick and the armored dude, cuz so far they are rockin the casbah!

I agree with the warrior woman's calves, it would've been nice to see some more defined muscles in the legs.

Thegodzero · Oct 2006

Hot man very hot! Now finish up the other models!

Mark Dygert · Oct 2006

I love it all no crits, perfect examples of what people should be making.

Daz · Oct 2006

Excellent quality work aniceto, I always enjoy looking at your models. One thing that niggles away at me about Acilia, particularly in profile, is just how high up on her head her eyes are. I dunno, I guess it's a certain style choice that you have going on, but a small forehead on a long face is in danger of giving someone the appearance of a lack of brains ;-) Hope you dont mind, did a quick paint on the right. Just an idea. It's beautiful work either way:

Zcubed · Oct 2006

Great work! You're pumping out high quality stuff at an alarming rate!

Could we see a wireframe of the new knight character? I'm curious as to what resolution/level of detail you work at.

EarthQuake · Oct 2006

Fantastic to see this done david, and nice work on those new meshes too, cant wait to see where you go with them.

aniceto · Oct 2006

Thanks for the critique guys

(and all them nice words ), pic appreciated Daz. Ill keep it all in mind when I revisit "Acilia". She's gone stale, so I'll come back later with a fresh eye

Zcubed: its mostly very low res geo at the moment, not much to look at really. My computer is a turd so I'm keeping it simple till i start putting things into MB
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/e343b0e6.jpg

Joao Sapiro · Oct 2006

fucking amazing man, good to see the solidness on your work !

aniceto · Oct 2006

boobies

aniceto · Nov 2006

wahh, cant let this thread die

bit more work on this guy too, but he's taken a back seat
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/adsdasdasd3343242342as.jpg

and this
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d3/shika01/a88ce224.jpg

critique much appreciated

rollin · Nov 2006

bit spacy but like it

finish this one pls !

MoP · Nov 2006

Always love seeing your new stuff, Aniceto - very nice!

pior · Nov 2006

Love!

kakikukeko · Nov 2006

I really like those two last posts!! great designs!

Spark · Nov 2006

Loving these Aniceto! I especailly like the alien one, great design in that one.

Spark

McIlroy · Nov 2006

That alien one is f-ing awesome man , would fit right in Mass Effect !

Thermidor · Nov 2006

Lovely work, I agree with Daz on the face proportions, sorta the only crit i can give on the work.

conte · Nov 2006

rulish, molodez.

BoBo_the_seal · Nov 2006

you must finish that bulky guy. I love his proportions.

- BoBo

_Shimmer · Nov 2006

seconding bobo

poopinmymouth · Nov 2006

You've got such nice details, especially in the mechanical stuff. Must be kangaroo juice!

gavku · Nov 2006

looks like he's from canberra, so more likely from fireworks and porn....

awesom stuff ancieto, ....

EarthQuake · Nov 2006

some of your edges are probablly a bit too tight to read in a normals map unless its really high res, and even then it would just get mipped out if you're not right up close to it. Otherwise awesome work. Mainly anything thats getting aliased real bad there wont show well.

shotgun · Nov 2006

love your stuff

slate · Nov 2006

In the first picture, what is the middle map for? With the blue face? Great job, by the way...

Mark Dygert · Nov 2006

Thats the spec map I think. Great characters BTW, awesome stuff.

aniceto · Nov 2006

Thanks everyone

We do get kangaroos in Canberra, but usually on the side of the road with their guts out(wombats too, awww)

EQ: YOUR edges are a bit too tight.

good advice though

sumea entry AND MOAR

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