BladeMaster WIP

warpy

hey folks, i have worked on this one the last weekend and here are the results. thanks for your replies in advance

DH_

like I said in IM, legs look short and the shoulder area could be cleaned up a bit otherwise its looking pretty solid.

CheeseOnToast

He has "deformed cylinder arms", and no proper elbows. I think you need to at least roughly define a bicep and tricep shape, even if you'ree relying on textures to describe them properly.
Otherwise, he looks quite nicely proportioned. Good luck with the Blizzard comp, if that's what he's for.

warpy

@cot you are right, i am not happy with the elbows or arms and yes i am relying on the texture . i might try to fix that. thanks.

warpy

here it is cnc are welcome

tremulant

Pretty cool texture, but there are a few things u need to fix...
Mostly there is too much blood on the sword...Look up some blood splattering theory, there is tons of it. Also texture the word better, give it more sharp highlights, and fix the geomotry near the middle of the blade, so it doesnt look broken....Aslo maybe work on adding some value to the pants.

cholden

Go back to your texture, and drop all the overlays; noise, blood, cracks, dirt, pictures, anything that isn’t hand painted. Post that version of your texture, and keep working on that. All these overlays are small detail, kill the shapes, and just look bad. But to be totally honest, you should revisit the torso, arms and head shape before texturing.

Joao Sapiro

yep, some anatomy issues that cholden pointed , and yup...redo that texture , its killing it. Try to define more muscle shape before adding details.

warpy

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Pretty cool texture, but there are a few things u need to fix...
Mostly there is too much blood on the sword...Look up some blood splattering theory, there is tons of it. Also texture the word better, give it more sharp highlights, and fix the geomotry near the middle of the blade, so it doesnt look broken....Aslo maybe work on adding some value to the pants.

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well spoken, thanks.

warpy

@cholden and johny, its my first texture and i had a deadline, but i'll do what you suggested.