#24 - Demon - Matt

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Yo. So this is my first Polycount contest and now that the school year has for the most part come to a close I should have plenty of time to finish this.

Concept:



Model:
I havent really done anything this low poly before so crits please. Right now hes at about 990 tris and I still have quite a bit of optimizing to do.

MoP

Hehe, fun
Nice start, keep it up!

retleks

That's so gross and cute. Looks like a beaver infected with the T-virus. Nice start.

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Guess im taking him into zbrush.. unless anyone sees somewhere I am wasting polys. That triangle could either go in his hair or work as a fly, I am not sure just yet. Ideas?

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Still very Wip

Asmuel

^^^ That kicks ass ^^^

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Lil more.

Showster

awesome man! my fucked up brain makes me think hes shitting his tail out of his ass, looks like he ate alot of corn!

Empty

yeah he is dragging a big piece of shit behind him...or lava I havent decided yet. It is a bit corny.

EarthQuake

this rocks my cock.

ElysiumGX

the tail looks like a giant poo, but the tongue is cool. nice one.

retleks

I still say beaver with a virus. And I still think it kicks ass.

Asmuel

Thats disgusting man. Atleast no one would F*ck with him, who wants to be hit in the face with a giant poo-tail.

steady

haha gross
gross but awesome!

zenarion

he is gross, that's right. is it going to be chibi?

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So I couldnt work yesterday because I was busy moving back home for the summer. Today I UV mapped the model and dropped the normals on just for kicks. I still have lots of clean up to in photoshop. Crits on the UV please. Im going with a 1024x512 if thats alright.

Vailias

The model looks nice.
The uv map however, is going to give you some serious issues with distortion in the face. There isn't a lot of wasted space, but I do think you should rethink how the head, and likely other bits, are layed out to avoid painfull painting.

hawken

my advice would be to put the head and tounge on one sheet, the rest of everything on another

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I definately dont mind puting my textures on two sheets. I just had some trouble deciding how to seperate the model. Only because I like keeping all my skin on one sheet, just because it makes it easier to keep it all the same. Whats the reasoning behind seperating the sheets?

[Edit] Ok I've spoken to a few people I think I got this worked out. Although I'd still appriciate everyones input.

Emil Mujanovic

The concept is awesome dude! Love the detail on the face and as I was reading down the thread, I got to see it come to life. GOOD FUCKING JOB!
I like doing my work on sheet as well but the way you have it unwrapped could be fixed up a little. I wont echo what everyone else has said because I'm sure you've read it !
The whole dragging the big turd around is awesome, it adds heaps of character! I initially thought it was a tail until I saw what you did with it in zBrush!
Keep it up man!

-caseyjones

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Wip. Just the diffuse. Quick crits please

Zergxes

Sick, and awesome. Maybe some more blues and greens?

Asmuel

Yea that red is a tad overwhelming. Tounge looks great, looks like an overstretched rectum at the base of the tail, cool but sick.

Tulkamir

Looking good, but as was said, the colours are a bit oversaturated/bright. Both the red and the green are a bit painful to look at. And some more variation would be nice.

Deffinatly looking aesome though, and I love the tongue.

hawken

perfect!

maybe twist the toungue and shite a bit so the model doesn't look dead on symetrical. not sure about the green horn... white mabye?

Zcubed

Looks great! I'll echo what others have said and recommend a little bit of desaturation.