Military Chick WIP

graves

Here's something I've been idly working on for some time. I started from an older, low poly model that I posted in the "SWAUWO?" thread and went from there. I haven't done too much highpoly work so i'd apreciate your feedback.



heres the low poly model

aesir

proportions look a bit off. Head a bit too big, legs too short.... stuff like that. Anyways, I'd just suggest checking it against a reference.

And could we see a smoothed version (no wires) of the high poly mesh?

KDR_11k

I think the wires on the highpoly shouldn't be subdivided, people want to see the cage.

graves

Thanks guys. I stretched the legs down a tad and made her head smaller. Here are some new images.

steady

excellent eye candy! no crits from me

hawken

stretch the torso out a bit (vertically)

Weiser_Cain

Nah, short people exist too, makes her stand out, but then I hate anatomy so I may be biased.

TelekineticFrog

This looks nice but there is one thing that jumps out at me and screams FIX ME! and that is the big 6 edged pole you have in the middle of her brow at the top of the nose. If you were to animated the face this could cause some problems in deformation for brow lifts and scrunches. I'd just go back in and reroute those edges to the left and right of the center and have the level of detail continue a lil further up the forehead and terminate them in ngon shapes on the forehead. It would be a cleaner result. You don't seem to be getting any odd smoothing error now but if it is to be animated it could be a possible problem. Other than that it looks great.

GoK

thats cool man i like the modeling!

Jody

graves

Thankee all
Ah yeah her vest does end a bit high.
Thanks for that TelekineticFrog, I've yet to any facial animations so i appreciate the insight.