Queen of hearts royal assassin
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I will use this space for the latest update, so what you see below is the as far as I am.
My friend said that I need to work on my anatomy so that's what i'm doing this for.
neck and head thing is done
My friend said that I need to work on my anatomy so that's what i'm doing this for.
neck and head thing is done
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Wireframe shots would be nice too.
[edit] clavical, thats it.
Nice modeling, the nose tip region is a bit triangular and the lips a bit rough but the overall props are clean
are you aiming for high or lowpoly ?
Actually, messing around with jaw structure is cool, and this looks realsitic enough to me to work.
Even, instead of fixing what is inhuman, push it further and start building a cahracter. Queen of heart's domestic assasin character. Make it slightly, grotesquely atractive perhaps, and fucked up jaw is a good start.
So far I just dont see how this head related to the thread topic. Cut the crap and focus on whats more important here, the design. Or, rename this to facial study.
The head itself looks great btw. Really good work there.
The only thing I could pick is her eyelid. The geomatry looks funky, especially from profile view.
Also, and this is a personality issue here, I guess, the corner of her jaw is very angular and square for a lady. Again, if you are striving for a sexy look, you're off. But I'd push it rather than try and fix it. You may end up with a sexy but a rather generic looking female head.
anyways.
do you have any concept of what you're going for? really curious in what the rest is going to look like.
edit: bleh, i'm stupid. no wonder it looked farmiliar.
That thing in the back is a wheeler
THIS NOT MY DRAWING:
http://ew2.lysator.liu.se/pic/fanq/s/e/selkis2/s_dorothy.jpg
I dunno whether the realistic face really works with the cartoon style hair. I suspect you might have been better to go for a more stylised look like your avatar. The texture might help to pull it all together, but you might want to think about making the face more cartoonish, pity that it is given how nicely realistic you've got it now.
Etienne
Also, I'm lolling at your url in between the teeth. Good work on that.
And besides, if those wern't defying gravity right now, they'd be sagging below her rib cage.
Ugh...
Other than that problem, it looks great. Nice work, dude.
But boob issues aside can we perhaps see a full body shot front and side? The face and hair looks great so far.
Poop - the titties will be held up by a coustume peice so no need to sag them but if she was naked that I would. Good eye.
Spider2cool - ratio better now?
Makkon - oh i'm on the band wagon. She isn't no little japanese girl, this girl is all american cornfed, hell I might make them bigger! thanks though.
The ass looks a bit too long vertically, maybe try pushing the bottom of the cheeks up a little to give them a nice round look.
I also agree that the breasts look rigid and hard.
keep on rollin, bilbo
My major crit is her rear. I know you've worked on it quite a bit already but she needs just a bit more work here. The cleft shouldnt ride as high as it does; maybe lower it by an inch to and inch and a half. However if you want to keep it the way it is I would suggest at least smoothing the transition from cheek to lower back. It might be the lighting but the sphere shape of the ass seems like it should flow a bit more cleanly to her waist. Finally while there is a gap left in the crotch at the top of the legs on a well defined woman, the thigh should probably come in just a bit to meet the butt. Either this or the hips should be flared a bit more. This will help to offset the size of the breasts too.
It's great to see you make such progress with this model and I cant wait to see the final piece. Best of luck moving forward with it.