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Quasar

I'm redoing her now that I use edit poly. The model is currently 2811 polys.






And the obligatory GI shot



I'm looking for anatomy and construction crits. Thanks!

nealb4me

Hey, you got a nice flow going on. Maybe just fix or spin that edge on the shoulder just above the armpit. It's pleasant to see such natural proportions. I'm looking forward to more

Quasar

Thanks Neal, that edge looks better unturned, it sticks out either way

Here's the finished model (I hope)



If I can find enough ref pics, I'll do a version of her in an environmental suit to make things more interesting.

nealb4me

Hmm sexy legs. It's looking really good, the only thing that will fix the shoulder is more polies. I guess if shes wearing a dark outfit it wouldn't be nearly as obvious though.

Quasar

I'm not too concerned about that edge sticking out if that's what you're refering to, however, if I find that the shoulders aren't deforming properly, then I'll add another edge loop or something. Thanks for the comment, now if only more people would reply...

Thermidor

i really like what you are doing , i recognised her , even tho ive never watched much of the show . the flow in the arms and legs is great, the shoulders too ... can we see a closup wire of the face?

Quasar

Thanks Thermidor. I already posted a closeup of the head in my first post, but here it is again; I only changed the hair and collapsed a few verticies since then.

Thermidor

opps , so you did
sorry.

i would maybe smooth the edge of the botton lips into the flesh around slightly

i still think the edge flow is pretty darn good.

Quasar

I've got her UV mapped and I've started painting



I think there's a fairly close resemblance, but I'd like to hear your guys' opinions.

...And before anyone brings it up, the hair is very much incomplete, I just laid down the base.

JO420

i would say uoi should define that hairline a little more

notman

The nostrils seem to large (they appear to start wrapping around nose)

JKMakowka

wow, now that is strange... you can see a good likelyness on the mesh, which is really well done. But with the texture on it it is all gone

Oh and please don't make the 'line' in the middel of the mouth so strait, it should more look like a very flat M from the front.

Quasar

Thanks for the comments, I'll consider all of them.

JKM, that's odd, I thought it's the other way around Maybe if I reduce the self-illum to 50 the shape of the model will show through more.