Schoolgirl - 小女孩

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Chrysanthi polygon
This is the new project i'll be working on! It is based on this awesome concept:


Link: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/kdqAd
Check out the artists portfolio, he has some super cool colorful characters! :D

The style i am going for is inspired mostly from the game Hyper Universe. I believe it fits this character a lot. I use this video to reference the proportions and to check out the characters and their skins:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K_pHB6yhoeM

I started blocking out, nothing exciting yet. i' m thinking of using Marvelous Designer for the school uniform to learn the basics of the software.
Any kind of feedback is always appreciated of course! ^_^




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  • Chrysanthi
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    Clothing progress
    Posting some progress of my high poly. I think i want to reshape the skirt because i'mm not 100% of the way it looks. I need to work on the arms and the legs next! Feedback is always welcome! ^_^


  • Tits
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    Good start on this!
    I definitly think there is a couple of thing that could be fixed about the anatomy however.
    In some shot the sternocleidomastoid looks a bit odd,it gives a weird curved look like its going toward the neck center instead of toward the back of the ears. I believe the shoulder are also a bit too round. I would also rework the scapula area which looks a bit odd at the moment.
    On the last shot the but also looks like it's has a bit of a weird shape to it, it looks like it's pulled from the side, gotta add some meat in the inside/middle of the cheek too!

    Regardless of all that, nice start, looking forward to see where you take this
  • Chrysanthi
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    @Tits Thank you so much! Yes, i definitely need to fix the anatomy, i probably should have done it sooner but i got carried away with the cute clothes... XD
    Your feedback is super helpful! I'll work on it the next few days! :smiley:
  • Chrysanthi
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    Worked on the anatomy, i tried to fix all the problematic areas. Not too happy with the changes i did on the head-neck area. I'll probably go back to the slimmer face, it looks a bit wide at the moment. I didn't spend too much on areas that will be covered.
    Also, i think i am almost done with the clothes, i need to work on the shoes and do some touch ups.
    Feedback is more than welcome! Especially on the anatomy and how similar the face is to the concept! :smile:


  • AgelosAp
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    AgelosAp greentooth
    This is looking good, I think you obviously leveled up since the mech! Feedback:
    1. Rotate the ears outwards so they stick out a little more
    2. The underboob area looks boxy, probably a little deeper crease and some smoothing of the curvature would help(especially on the 3/4 view on the bottom left, you can see it's more like a rounded rectangle)
    3. Cloth seams on shirt are a bit simple, I think if you run a dam_standard  with low strength on each side of the existing seam it would look better
    4. You could form the thighs a little more and exaggerate their shape.
    5. For similarity towards the concept the eyes are more even on it, meaning you should rotate the left eye counter clock-wise and the right one clock-wise, so the outter edge of the eyelids are even with the tear duct. This is a stylistic choice though, personally I like the face you got here.
    6. Maybe make the mouth a little narrower
    Hope this helps and isn't too much! Keep it up!
  • Chrysanthi
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    @AgelosAp
    Wow really helpful comments! Thank you so much for the feedback and the good words! :smiley:
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