Sketchbook: Gabby VanAmberg
polycounter lvl 2
Hi there! I'm currently a game art student and I'll be posting a lot of 2D and 3D work. Critiques always welcome!
For a closer look at the geometry and where it is at now, click the sketchfab link here: https://skfb.ly/6xCOT
For a closer look at the geometry and where it is at now, click the sketchfab link here: https://skfb.ly/6xCOT
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Currently Working on 3D modeling this concept art by Elodie Mondoloni (Original post: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/v690x)
I'll be taking it through a full game dev pipeline to make it a game ready asset!
Here is my first rough rough blockout!
A few updates! Added some details and started turbosmoothing!
Looking good so far! Just subbed to the thread and looking forward to more!
So i'll be honest I'm a little bummed to see you wrapping this piece up. I don't think it's in a terrible spot by any means, but there are some parts that definitely come across as not finished. And personally I think if it was a time constraint thing, you could really make this model pop if you revisit it. I made a side by side of your model against the concept to help illustrate what I mean:
I think where you've got the van is looking pretty solid! But, if you compare yours against the concept there's a handful of stuff that I think you added and tweaked to your model could really make it pop! If you just check the circle areas on the concept compared against your model, I think you'll have a good idea what I mean.
I definitely understand time constraints and being under pressure to hit a deadline. I think what you've got right now is pretty good! But if you're looking for a great solid portfolio piece I say give yourself a small break from this project and then come back and hit parts I pointed out.
Awesome to have been following along on this thread and I hope to see an update in the future.