Feedback/Thoughts on this animation?

MereZy · Mar 2018

Hello.

I've worked on this animation for a couple of days now and feel satisfied with the result. However i'd appreciate if a new pair of eyes could take a look and perhaps provide some feedback on it.

-MereZy.

(my first time using sketchsync, hopefully everything works as intended.)

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/d69a1fcf2e76/

Thanks.

Arturow · Mar 2018

strange , I can't write or paint on the animation ;o

MereZy · Mar 2018

Arturow said:

strange , I can't write or paint on the animation ;o

Should work now, sorry for that.

MereZy · Mar 2018

I adjusted the things based on the feedback and also added/changed other things. Have a look.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/d69a1fcf2e76/#354927

-MereZy

AGoodFella · Mar 2018

Left some notes.

MereZy · Mar 2018

AGoodFella said:

Left some notes.

Highly appreciated.

MereZy · Mar 2018

Decided to add more variation to the throws and also changed the final idle pose to something with more action. Have a look. Critique is more than welcome.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/d69a1fcf2e76/#359787

-MereZy

MereZy · Mar 2018

Made alot of effort creating this run cycle for Deadpool. Have a look.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/d69a1fcf2e76/#367992

AGoodFella · Mar 2018

Left a few notes, sorry for the bad drawings, I'm too lazy to connect my tablet.

Nice run, the foundations are there, just need to push some stuff more.

MereZy · Mar 2018

Thank you very much!

Did not use reference for this run though. Just going for what feels right I guess.

_adamturnbull · Mar 2018

Hey, I left some notes and some drawings

MereZy · Mar 2018

Thank you very much Adam!

MereZy · Mar 2018

After a good amount of hours adjusting and adding things to the run cycle this is what I ended up with.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/d69a1fcf2e76/#368283

Also playblasted a comparison with what should be the first version of the run.

Some of the things i adjusted/added.

(reduced the run cycle by 1 frame, else the spacing of some curves would be inconsistant. If that makes sense. ^^)

COG's Y-curve. Made him lift as he pushed off with the back leg as well as increasing the time in the air.

Had him rotate forward as he landed/made impact with the ground as well as squash his upper body to make it feel more lose and less stiff.

Slightly rotated the feet outwards.

Gave more lead to the arms by offsetting the body's rotation as well as having the arms start swinging earlier.

Added side to side rotation to the upper body.

The arms are no longer punching the air. Haha

Feedback/Thoughts on this animation?

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