For the "Alice" character, are you planning on using the Annie in Wonderland skin? The overall image looks lovely so far!!
I think the lighting should come from in front right-side, rather than the back/ right-side lighting seen here. The scene is getting lost and from afar, it looks muddy.
Shaco in this scene is more of a party crasher, rather than the Cheshire Cat sneaking in from the shadows, so the heavy, dark lighting doesn't lend itself to that kind of energy for me.
With that in mind, I love the bottom left and bottom right in terms of the temperature of the lighting. I'm leaning more on the side of the bottom right, the contrast between that fuschia and the yellow background work really well.
I love it so far! Keep up the great work!! I hope I did not sound like a jerk. XD Please take what you will of my critique. It's your piece, do what you want with it!
Looks awesome, very soft render specially But i think face in left side - looks strange, mb better make it darker and add focus blur? Because all instead of it looks cool
@MaoAkariThanks for the advice! But I think a little to change composition, more dynamics and less warm light. A blur will be, but closer to the finale c:
Looks like you've got some comic book reference for the face, very Joker Couple things to point out: Watch for the perspective of the table and chair, it's getting a bit floaty. There's a weird tangent happenin with the guard's face and Annie's torso. Almost looks like a deformed arm. I'd say nudge it a bit.
it's turning out really good! as others have pointed out i still think you have to fix the perspective on all the objects. Also i feel like there is not too much going on here, maybe you should put sme more characters in the background? having a tablecloth would also work...
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Definitely like the first two best, very dynamic, and show shacos face.
Good luck dude!
I think the lighting should come from in front right-side, rather than the back/ right-side lighting seen here. The scene is getting lost and from afar, it looks muddy.
Shaco in this scene is more of a party crasher, rather than the Cheshire Cat sneaking in from the shadows, so the heavy, dark lighting doesn't lend itself to that kind of energy for me.
With that in mind, I love the bottom left and bottom right in terms of the temperature of the lighting. I'm leaning more on the side of the bottom right, the contrast between that fuschia and the yellow background work really well.
I love it so far! Keep up the great work!! I hope I did not sound like a jerk. XD Please take what you will of my critique. It's your piece, do what you want with it!
Bye bye!
But i think face in left side - looks strange, mb better make it darker and add focus blur? Because all instead of it looks cool
(sorry for comment ;3)
Couple things to point out:
Watch for the perspective of the table and chair, it's getting a bit floaty.
There's a weird tangent happenin with the guard's face and Annie's torso. Almost looks like a deformed arm. I'd say nudge it a bit.