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the Sad and angry girl and Zombie Chocolate

pascalie
pascalie
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hello everyone
please  this is my new shot please i need our opinon and critique
thanks for support 

Link : https://youtu.be/sOvfzmQaf3I
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  • Einar
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    Einar polycounter lvl 5
    Upload your piece to https://syncsketch.com/ and i'll toss you some notes.

    Overall i find the walk of the zombie with its bouncy hat the most interesting and fun thing about the piece, and i would actually just focus on making that into a cycle if i were you.

    You kindoff have a too long shot here, so you are forced to focus on too many things, which takes your focus away from making the individual parts of it great and memorable. It's just my recommendation. Simplify and focus on one thing at the time. Good luck!
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  • pascalie
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    pascalie polycounter lvl 2
    ok thanks i'll do the update version
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