Male Character feedback needed

Aoffo

Hi everyone, 
This is my first post here. I've been learning Zbrush for a little over 2 years but I'm always a little weary about showing my work online. Silly I know! :P
This is the character I'm currently working on and some critique would be most welcome! I'm planning on making him a King type character, (possible a game character)  and will be giving him a crown and such also. 
Let me know how his proportions and style are looking. I know hero type characters are usually about 8 heads in height. This guy is a little under that, but it can be adjusted if needed. Some of his accessories still need further sculpting such as the boots etc..
I'm planning on learning marmoset viewer to render him once everything is looking good, anatomically and texture wise. I usually just use Maya but I've seen so many nice renders here using marmoset, I said I will give it a try.
Thanks guys

carvuliero

Pants look off - maybe give them a bit more gravity or add more volume around crotch 
You could also ease his fingers , slight bend at middle knuckle will do it 
Rest is looking solid great job !

Aoffo

carvuliero said:

Pants look off - maybe give them a bit more gravity or add more volume around crotch 
You could also ease his fingers , slight bend at middle knuckle will do it 
Rest is looking solid great job !


Thanks Man thats great feedback!
I really like the reference you showed. I might try and recreate that, and relax the hands too

carvuliero

You are welcome 

Aoffo

Update;

carvuliero

Pants look much better now 
You can add him superciliary arches and tone down temporal line 
Also beard look too even and fake , in reality beard  bend out of skin and then fall dawn in irregular patterns so probably yours missing some volume 

Aoffo

Thank you again Carvuliero! You are really giving really nice tips! Yeah the beard was just a quick mashup. I will add more irregularity and detail to it. Will add some hair too. But of course in the final piece I will add some hair card using Xgen or something

Aoffo

another quick update. I Tried some fibermesh to try out instead of sculpted hair.