Ninja run - Feedback needed

ikhaled0n

hey community  :*

I was trying to create a ninja-run based on the reference i have and i saw that it needs feedback so it could be better and here is the result.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/179027#228207

looking for your replies  

Arturow

look really fluid , good job left you some tiny notes

LiamReynolds

Looks nice. Only real nit picky things for me would be to lower the rotation/wiggle on the weapons and have them more steady and that goes for the head aswell.

ikhaled0n

thanks Arturow  for your feedback I made another version take a look 

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/179027#228617

LiamReynolds i tried lower rotation on the weapon but i don't know felt it stable for the body fast movement or maybe just i did it wrong, thanks by the way

ikhaled0n

Rendered version

tiagosol

hey @ikhaled0n
I really like the pose and how you handle all the body movement. But couple of  things that caught my attention right away were, if he is running he needs more speed, he is kind of jogging right now. The bouncing on his hips should read better now there is no weight in there and looks like the upper body is not connected to the lower one. keep up the good job