Hi, in general I like it, I think your materials and the texture you integrated are pretty well done. The main thing you could improve on is probably composition, it's difficult to see the focal point in the picture, you could either blur parts of the image. I took the picture and tweaked the perspective slighty to give you a quick idea. It's not perfect though. Your lighting and shading is much better than mine, so good job on that. The only thing would maybe to have some more light passing through the curtains. I really like the sky you hace and the table is also really cool. Keep going and I'd love to see more of your art! Good luck
Id say your main issue is composition. the painting is looking very empty and frankly really boring. some things to consider is why your making the illustration in the first place: whats happening here? why are we looking at this?
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Your lighting and shading is much better than mine, so good job on that. The only thing would maybe to have some more light passing through the curtains. I really like the sky you hace and the table is also really cool. Keep going and I'd love to see more of your art! Good luck
some things to consider is why your making the illustration in the first place: whats happening here? why are we looking at this?