Looking for critiquing on some game characters

misfit2588

Hi I'm new to polycount,but I'm looking for some professional or experienced game developer advice about some drawing for a video game idea I've been working on. Please , I just want to know if I'm headed in the right direction. I'm am a student in Game Art and Design. I've been in school for 2 years now and would like pointers to make sure I'm headed where i need to be.



 They are all still works in progress so any advice is helpful.

PattyWhacker

I really like the first one. Good luck with finishing.

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Tosmo

I agree with TeriyakiStlye, You have some nice drawing but your photos need some adjustment. Here is a video that should give some helpful tips: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YwRc9-f_zN4

If you don't have Photoshop to make adjustments with, there are plenty free softwares such Gimp and Krita that have similar tools. 

misfit2588

Thanks , to both of you i will remember to make the correct adjustments in the future.

misfit2588

Ok I'm working on this one
And did some lighting on these