Old MP5A2

Spode · May 2017

Spent a while creating this piece. Still trying to learn my way around the finer aspects of high poly modelling and baking, as well as Substance Painter but i think Im getting there, slowly but surely

Link to the artstation page Ive put it on: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/QYanZ

Any and all critiques are welcome, please feel free to fire away as i always looking to improve my work : D

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skyline5gtr · May 2017

it's hard to see the model since the BG is so close to the color of the gun. I suggestion working on the presentation and posting it again

Spode · May 2017

Fair enough, ill get it re rendered out in a few

Spode · May 2017

Sorted it out, re rendered with a brighter background

skyline5gtr · May 2017

I'm not sure where you are pulling your reference from but there are some differences that I found

Image: http://hkusa.s3.amazonaws.com/20160801145247/1-MP5A2-NT-RIGHT-JULY-2016.jpg

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You are missing the rear stock sling holder
The grip is too flat and should be more rounded
You are missing some screw on the receiver
your fire Icons differ

the materials seem off especially the hard plastic stock, grip and forward grip as there is very little grain on it vs the metal parts like magazine and receiver

Old MP5A2

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