IS 2 Tank [WIP]

z0la89 · Feb 2017

Hello everyone, this is my 1st post here

This is a personal project for my portfolio, that i have been working on for a while.
I would like to hear your C&C to help me finish it the best way possible.
Any comments are more than welcome.

Model from maya :

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/1l/da3f0x9j18e2.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/1z/l9tqm7ev2srx.jpg

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and model from ZBrush :

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/z6/02gwa5xgg2ls.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/ob/9tpu0tfowrgc.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/3i/zwt9fiqgsci1.jpg

defragger · Feb 2017

really nice detailing on the turret!
The metal cable on the rear looks a bit thick and heavy imho. But otherwise its coming along great so far.

z0la89 · Feb 2017

Hi defragger,
Thanks for your comment,
I will try to fix it

Anyone else ?

MiAlx · Feb 2017

Good work dude! but I when I look at it, parts feel naked and parts feel detailed.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/da/u8aehpvb1swg.png

The parts that I marked as red feel "off" to me because it has this big contrast between detailed and.. simple? I am not a modeller so I can't really explain it, but maybe this will help! Maybe adding a few panels and keeping a more cohesive feeling all around would really push it. Anyway, nice man.

z0la89 · Feb 2017

Thank you a lot for this coment

It is very usefull,
I didnt finish with sculpting , so i will definitely try to fix it

Thanks one more time

jaker3278 · Feb 2017

Has a lot of potential, cant wait for textures. What are you going to texture with?

z0la89 · Feb 2017

Thanks,
I am going to make game model, so i will use substance painter for texturing

IS 2 Tank [WIP]

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