Second Head -- Feedback Please!

allengingrich · May 2016

Finally got around to doing a second head. This one is much improved over my last one (where I went too high poly too fast). One thing that bothers me is that she doesn't look feminine enough for me. What's making her masculine? Any advice or critiques are welcome!

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/l2/visf51712dop.jpg

pmiller001 · May 2016

Her head is too square. Her jawline is way wide. IS this in perspective or Ortho? . Might want to check it from the side, thats what helps me.

allengingrich · May 2016

pmiller001 said:

Her head is too square. Her jawline is way wide. IS this in perspective or Ortho? . Might want to check it from the side, thats what helps me.

Thank you, that helps a lot! I didn't go into Ortho once, when I probably should have been. How's this?

pmiller001 · May 2016

Thats already an improvement. Make sure to use reference, and pay attention to the Planes of the head

PS- You still might be up too high on your polycount

Second Head -- Feedback Please!

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