nautical sci-fi environment

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This is the concept that I will be using as a base for my environment.


Artists name : Toni Bratincevic
Toni's website : http://www.interstation3d.com/

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I'v blocked out in colour what I plan to take over to my environment.


List of assets to think about making

1. Fridge
2. Gears
3. Pipes
4. Rubble
5. Cabinets
6. Torpedo
7. Table
8. Engine/gear machine
9. Door/hatch
10. Tiled wall texture
11. Tiled floor texture
12. Draws
13. Safe
14. Fence
15. Scuba gear
16.Small props like knifes and light fixtures

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Block out in Maya:

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Iv started the environment with the gear box seeing as its what drew me to it in the 1st place.

Here is the shell of it.

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added the gears to the engine I'm still undecided though I may add more but ill come back to it in a couple days and see with fresh eyes.

WarrenM

I think you have some scaling discrepancies that aren't helping the piece. In the gear/window thing the pipe connectors are larger and more ornate in the concept and the gears inside are smaller. It's a better balance and lends itself more to looking like a cohesive focal point.

LOVE that concept art tho ... thanks for sharing!

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WarrenM wrote: »

I think you have some scaling discrepancies that aren't helping the piece. In the gear/window thing the pipe connectors are larger and more ornate in the concept and the gears inside are smaller. It's a better balance and lends itself more to looking like a cohesive focal point.

LOVE that concept art tho ... thanks for sharing!

Thanks so much for your advice WarrenM I shall put that into action right now! I think I'v been looking at it for far too long haha.

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made some changes to the engine put more gears into it and I feel it looks a lot better

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Here is the Fridge

Sugus

That's a very nice concept right there. I few cents regarding the fridge: By adding the SMEG branding to it you're bringing the scene to a contemporary time period. Judging from the concept it looks as though the scene is set a bit more into the past, with all the gearwork etc.

This might be my own opinion but maybe have a think about it.

The sculpt looks really nice, looking forward to the bake/materials and to see how this scene progresses. Good luck

Joshbate182

Sugus wrote: »

By adding the SMEG branding to it you're bringing the scene to a contemporary time period. Judging from the concept it looks as though the scene is set a bit more into the past, with all the gearwork etc.

This might be my own opinion but maybe have a think about it.

Its a good opinion as though I was just worried that it looked a tad bit plain so I wanted to add a bit more to it that's all I may have a look with out it though and see how it works in the scene.

Thanks for the feed back much appreciated!

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One of the cupboards for the room

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Here is my Scuba Suit I have 2 versions of the rubber/cloth material that protects him.

The first one I made has a lot more creases in it but i think too many. So this inspired me to make another one that is a lot more basic.

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This is more less crease scuba suit I'm not 100% sure it works though.

Cay

Did you use references for the folds in his suit? I know those can be a nightmare to sculpt, but it currently looks a little blobby and undefined.. and they don't make a lot of sense. I think most of these suits create sharp folds (thinner material). And there has to be some kind of visible connection between the different parts, otherwise it looks as if they are just stuck in there.

Btw. the original image is pretty awesome, interested in what you can do with it. ^^

It's not the best reference, but you get the idea.

jStins

This is a cool concept and there's some nice hard surface work so far, but I do agree that the suit is the weakest element at this point. I get the feeling there's a body in the suit looking at the concept, but the sculpt feels empty and undefined.

Do you have a proxy mesh for the underlying anatomy? I would take super average man or Nick Z's base, pose that and sculpt the organic parts of the suit around that. You could also omit the figure / suit and maintain the appeal of the concept I think.

Good luck with the project!

BARDLER

You should blockout more of the scene, composition, and lighting before you start sculpting all those props.

Joshbate182

Hey guys thanks so much for the feed back I really appreciate it. Also it's the 1st time doing cloth and I'm finding it really difficult. But I will take your feed back on board and try to improve it by putting a body in the suit and try adding some seams where needed

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ok I'v had another stab at this scuba suit! here is the out come

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Here is one of my floor textures. Ill also be making one where there are tiles missing as well.

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Floor texture with bits of tiles missing

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This is my wall texture I will also be adding other little texture details later to brake it up more 

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Here is some rubble for the room.

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Roof for my room the hole will go at the back of the room to give it more character.

TheKlu

This is looking very nice, i really love how is this going  

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thank you so much i start the low poly stuff next week

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some more rubble

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Bomb for the desk

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just a re-render of the engine.

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Box for over the scubs man's head 

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another cupboard for the room.

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Not happy with my Props that have wood materials in them so I'm reworking all the wood with alphas i have made with Photos.

Here you can see the before and after I feel it looks a lot better

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here is my hand painted wall texture

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this is my finished door texture iv tired to add specular to the places where the is still  varnish on the wood

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Tiled Floor texture 

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I know its been along time since I've posted but I'm starting this project up again because I had a lot of university work that needed doing  

I've reworked what I've made to give the room more character and some of the textures just where not feeling right!