Future Policewoman (Finished!)

Magihat

Update:
She is finished! Check out the marmoset viewer scene my artstation: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/karin-6db35cff-9df6-42c5-a1c2-3921d386ebf9



Hey guise!

This is a character I have been working on for some time. Trying to learn as much as I can and putting it to practice, especially high level of detail and polish as I have been lacking in those departments before.

All types of feedback is greatly appreciated!

PyrZern

The hip bone pocket things look weird to me...

Magihat

PyrZern wrote: »

The hip bone pocket things look weird to me...

Just as a thing or the way it's done?

Magihat

Almost done with the lowpoly and unwraps some tweaking mainly with the hair left but then its off to substance.. Right now she is about 18500 tris.

Robert_H

I think she looks good but needs something more police like maybe some police colours added to her clothing at the moment I am sort of getting a bit s&m vibe. apart from that I think it is really good!

Erich Hess

It looks good! I look forward to seeing it textured and posed. Are you going to have her in an environment?

Magihat

Textures pretty much done, I have also begun playing with marmosetshaders and tried to do some more natural hair, still a long way (weapon, glasses, mouth, tweaks, posing etc) to go though.

Robert_H wrote: »

I think she looks good but needs something more police like maybe some police colours added to her clothing at the moment I am sort of getting a bit s&m vibe. apart from that I think it is really good!

Hah, yes. The only thing missing is the whip! I don't think the colors I went with screams police but I

Erich Hess wrote: »

It looks good! I look forward to seeing it textured and posed. Are you going to have her in an environment?

Thank you. I have an environment in mind but I think I will go for something simple for the initial presentationshots.

Magihat

Posetests!

Silhouettes and backsides. Right now I am leaning towards 4 myself as it's more dynamic but 2 probably shows of the model better. Any thoughts?

Magihat

Finished! Went with pose 4. Added the presentation shot and link to marmoset viewer in the original post. Still appreciate any kind feedback though!

almighty_gir

Just an ever-so-slight resemblance to Lin Beifong's police uniform there...

Anyway, for crits... she's got a pretty big under bite, and her eyes are in a permanent shocked opening.

I think her poses could be a lot more dynamic too. at the very least, more functional.

Uberren

The black uniform on top of a black background is making it very hard to see your model

Magihat

Thanks for the feedback gir. Very valuable input as I have stared myself blind working on her the last few days. Did some quick test adjustments in maya and just even adding a small squint and slightly pushing back her jaw made a big difference. Will probably update the pose later today or tomorrow.

(had to google who Lin Beifong was and oh god, its really about time I watch that show)

Uberren wrote: »

The black uniform on top of a black background is making it very hard to see your model

I'm so used to seeing it so I didn't even think about readability Added it to my fixlist!

Magihat

Adjusted the pose, background and face:

Magihat

Forgot to post to this thread but I consider her (and the gun) finished, still taking suggestions about things that I can keep in mind for the future
https://timoliverhaag.files.wordpress.com/2015/12/newrender2.png
Viewer and sketchfabs of both are at my artstation (linked in my signature and in the main entry).