Ancelmo Toledo work samples/ tear my works to improve it.

chemotoledo

Hello polycount community,

I'll show some of my art works so you people can give my critiques, comments and feedback with your refined eye.

Please, feel free to comment, I really appreciate any commento so I can improve my work . Also I can answer any question of my work, process and any thing of it.

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chemotoledo

Another one to destroy with C&C!

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chemotoledo

And a last one for the momment,

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Lloth

Solid modelling. Your last character seems to lack a little bit of contrast though. Right now that clashes with the black outline you gave him

Jean-Pascal

As Lloth mentionned, your textures lack a bit of contrast (they seem washed out). You might want to take a look at your values.

Here's a quick edit I did in photoshop:

chemotoledo

Hi Lloth,
Fits of all, ty to take the time to write nice comments!

Yea, I think I had some issues with the contrast, I need to find the right balance, I'm working on it! Comment on the list, je ty so much Lloth! (Y)

chemotoledo

Hi Jean-Pascal,

Oo that example you show expose nicely this issue! So nice demonstration, ty Pascal.
I'll work on that Its nice to receive this critics!