Title screen - needs critique

LivMeansLife

I'm working on a title screen for a game, and so I've created this so far.

The picture is inspired by the justice league cartoons opening.
It needs an epic feel, and so I'm hoping for some critique :poly121:.

jonjon

Hey LivMeansLife, real cool idea for a title screen

I'd say all the really needs to be done is to make that lighting around the edge of the characters a bit brighter and the also make the lighting coming from each of the characters's eyes and mouths brighter as well. That'll really push the contrast of the piece and will make it pop just that bit more. High contrast is appealing to the eye in things like this.

Well done so far, you've got some really nice character silhouettes

Spearhafoc

I like the art part a lot. My only concern is that the text doesn't immediately read to me. I had to look at it for a second to figure out what it said. Not a huge problem though.

Marshkin

I agree with Speahafoc, I initially misread the title as "flash" rather then Clash. Also it looks a bit tiny compared to the figures.

I really like the use of colors, as well as the background, which has a fair bit of action to it, against the silhouettes.

Muzzoid

Use an image host dude, not attachments.

Imgur works for the lazy.