This is just very good man. Only thing I'd suggest is making her weapon go more with the perspective. Now it seems to hang sideways, if you get what I mean.
Thanks! yesss i agree too, im working on it, maybe i gonna switch the weapon to the other hand or i'll open more the composition ^^, thanks again for the feedback
More wip, i open a bit more the compo, i tried to make the sword go more with the perspective, like Enalya said, also i add those energy balls, still messing around with this ^^
Looks awesome. The only thing I noticed that looked slightly off is that the hand looks a bit 'manly', but I'm not sure how you'd go about adjusting this, possibly more slender/tapering fingers?
I really look forward for the development of this piece. Diana is one of my favorite characters and you manage to capture that neat & dark side of the moon of her.
I like your values and the face is a gorgeous capture.
Be sure to remember and nail down a nice mixture of the light sources; The Balls, Sword and her forehead Sigil. That way you can both capture the eye and also play around with the mystique.
hhaahha yeaah, maybe it's cause i took a photo of my hand as reference, i'll try to maka it more femenine, Thanks Adam Chilton, JangMai
Kristoffer Bjorklund, Thanks man, that's the idea, i have this concept of Vegeance, Thx for the advices ^^
Duranial, Graciasl seguro pongo un link luego ^^ (Edit: aqui va: http://www.pandemoniumart.net/brushes/ aqui estan la mayoria de las brochas que uso, si no todas, saludos!)
Gracias Jose! me perdi el Hangout denuevo hahaha, hablamos ^^
More Wip! i've been working on the story and the compo, so here is, i think it's the final sketch for this ^^ i think i gonna call this, "Vengeful Diana"
@Piasek89 Thanks! @Duranial, arriba edite el post y puse el link a los brush sets que uso, Saludos
More Wip! working on color right now, im not sure if i like the background with the solari symbol, maybe it's too simple, gotta work more on it, but before that, i have to fix the elbow, that almost disappear.
I am totally with you when it comes to the background. The problem I feel with it is that it's way too narrow. Perhaps set up a plan for a more dynamic background instead?
@Bishop313 and Maegan Oberhardt, Thanks you guys ^^, rlly appreciate it
@Kristoffer yeah, i've been trying recompo the image, and some sketches over it, but right now im paiting more items and detallis on this wall, i rlly like the idea of this symbol that drives the attention to her face, all the lines and the circles, so, maybe ill keep it simple.. or maybe ill work on something more complex, at the momment im considering every comment here, as long as i have time to make changes, so, Thanks you Mr. ^^
More wip! well, i finally resolved in keep the wall as background, i feel like it's simple but it can tell a story and now im working on her armor. Let me know what you think ^^ C&C are welcome
The ooooonly crit I have is that her Khopesh looks like a bow. Her pose looks like she's wielding a bow too. This whole time I thought she was holding a bow until now when I saw that her other hand was on the wall, and I was thinking, "that's not how you hold a bow" and THEN I realised "hang on, Diana doesn't USE a bow!"
Probably when you've rendered the khopesh with a blade edge, this will start looking much clearer, but otherwise if you feel up for it, maybe try play around with holding the weapon at a different angle? Though this might mess with your composition...just pretend I never said anything, because this looks really cool as it is xD
Her colours are so cool, I love the subtle colours and the painterly style.
Have I mentioned yet how much I love her hair?
The ooooonly crit I have is that her Khopesh looks like a bow. Her pose looks like she's wielding a bow too. This whole time I thought she was holding a bow until now when I saw that her other hand was on the wall, and I was thinking, "that's not how you hold a bow" and THEN I realised "hang on, Diana doesn't USE a bow!"
Probably when you've rendered the khopesh with a blade edge, this will start looking much clearer, but otherwise if you feel up for it, maybe try play around with holding the weapon at a different angle? Though this might mess with your composition...just pretend I never said anything, because this looks really cool as it is xD
Her colours are so cool, I love the subtle colours and the painterly style.
Have I mentioned yet how much I love her hair?
I agree wtih this. I thought she was also weilding a bow. (not a LOL player) There is a lot of the pose and composition that leads to the idea of a bow in hand. I do like the idea of te hand intereacting witht the wall. A lovely treat for the eyes as well.
Dang that hair is beautiful. Your rendering is great. The foreshortening is a bit tricky and it is a very ambitious illustration. I can't wait to see another wip!
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I'm looking forward to it
I really look forward for the development of this piece. Diana is one of my favorite characters and you manage to capture that neat & dark side of the moon of her.
I like your values and the face is a gorgeous capture.
Be sure to remember and nail down a nice mixture of the light sources; The Balls, Sword and her forehead Sigil.
/Cheers
Kris
I do agree that perhaps her grip is just that bit too tight/masculine, but it does give her a more intimidating stance
Kristoffer Bjorklund, Thanks man, that's the idea, i have this concept of Vegeance, Thx for the advices ^^
Duranial, Graciasl seguro pongo un link luego ^^ (Edit: aqui va: http://www.pandemoniumart.net/brushes/ aqui estan la mayoria de las brochas que uso, si no todas, saludos!)
Gracias Jose! me perdi el Hangout denuevo hahaha, hablamos ^^
best of luck
@Piasek89 Thanks!
@Duranial, arriba edite el post y puse el link a los brush sets que uso, Saludos
C&C are welcome ^^
I am totally with you when it comes to the background. The problem I feel with it is that it's way too narrow. Perhaps set up a plan for a more dynamic background instead?
/Cheers
Kris
best of luck with the competition!! ^_^
@Kristoffer yeah, i've been trying recompo the image, and some sketches over it, but right now im paiting more items and detallis on this wall, i rlly like the idea of this symbol that drives the attention to her face, all the lines and the circles, so, maybe ill keep it simple.. or maybe ill work on something more complex, at the momment im considering every comment here, as long as i have time to make changes, so, Thanks you Mr. ^^
@Cabertovon Thanks, me too hahaha
More Wip! Detail of the hand, im still paiting the light on it, but i think it's almost done ^^
Edit: The blood on the wall is still on process
More wip! well, i finally resolved in keep the wall as background, i feel like it's simple but it can tell a story and now im working on her armor. Let me know what you think ^^ C&C are welcome
Probably when you've rendered the khopesh with a blade edge, this will start looking much clearer, but otherwise if you feel up for it, maybe try play around with holding the weapon at a different angle? Though this might mess with your composition...just pretend I never said anything, because this looks really cool as it is xD
Her colours are so cool, I love the subtle colours and the painterly style.
Have I mentioned yet how much I love her hair?
I agree wtih this. I thought she was also weilding a bow. (not a LOL player) There is a lot of the pose and composition that leads to the idea of a bow in hand. I do like the idea of te hand intereacting witht the wall. A lovely treat for the eyes as well.