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Female Warrior Concept

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Not sure what to add in the background, and still polishing up on photoshop skills, made the eyes bigger than normal trying to go for a stylized feel but semi realism, still trying to find my strengths, any critiques would be awesome, and also plan to model a 3d version

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  • Gail_Blitzy
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    Gail_Blitzy polycounter lvl 8
    Heyo!

    Got some lovely shading and you have a good grasp on colours!

    After a little google here are some ideas for your background

    http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131217002249/p__/protagonist/images/8/89/Xena.jpeg

    http://www.chilloutpoint.com/images/2010/08/fantastic-kickass-women-warriors/fantastic-kickass-women-warriors-04.jpg

    I've also annotated your drawing with some possible improvements on proportion.

    So from top to bottom -

    • Scaled up the size of the nose and mouth – if you google face proportions, generally the edges of the mouth line up with the middle of your characters eyes (the blue lines)
    • Made the shoulders a little narrower
    • I felt the arms were a lit long so shortened them a bit – if you look at women you will see that generally the elbows are at around the middrift of the body (bottom of the ribcage, a bit above the pelvis).
    • Sexy ladies have lovely big hips – you want the hips to generally be equal to or wider than your characters shoulders
    • I’ve also added a sword and moved the shield – You’ve posed your character like she’s about to pounce on the attack. So use the environment and accessories to emphasis that

    Photoshop is a powerful drawing tool - you can edit and edit and edit to your hearts content and still have your original image to refer back too. So i look forward to seeing what you do next with your character =)
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