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GarageBay9
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GarageBay9 polycounter lvl 13
Been soaking up a lot of Rob Cunningham and J Aaron Kambeitz's work lately, and this fell out when I shook my brain. :poly142:

Finished it up Sunday evening. Crits welcome, don't do as much tradigital work and would love to improve.

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  • GarageBay9
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    GarageBay9 polycounter lvl 13
    Would love some feedback if anyone can spare some, folks. :)
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  • JamesArk
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    JamesArk polycounter lvl 10
    Really cool, and gives off a Halo vibe with the long shapes and the semi circle near the top.

    The two things I would say it needs are: something in the bottom half/different cropping to remove the empty space at the bottom, and a stronger focal point. The big lights are the focal point right now and seem to want to lead somewhere, angling towards the middle of the image, but the only real contrast besides that is the cloud and the ships which IMO aren't bold enough yet to really support that yet.
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