TURRIM (working title)

carmar4

hello polycount! thanks for stumbling onto my thread, these are some concept ideas that I have been working on for a interesting story. I plan on putting most the pieces and others into a concept book for my idea. critiques are extremely
welcome

carmar4

some of these pieces are rendered better than others, I was more focused on practicing composition.

Muzzoid

Hey man, great initiative.

Agreed on what Dado has to say.

I think honestly your best move would be to actual do some digital still life studies, for example something like this. http://janaschi.deviantart.com/art/still-life-124492243

Start out in just black and white and work your way up to colour.

The main reason being is that you are creating and drawing, but your rendering so far doesn't have much of a basis of what is actually happening with light, and i feel that this sort of exersize would get you great results in a short time.

carmar4

newest addition, did what you guys told me and I practiced some more Value plannig this week. Hope you guys like it.

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carmar4

newest piece for my project

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