[WIP] Power Girl

M4rt3

hey guys, i would like to share a character i'm working on.

I chose PowerGirl because i like all the funny gags built around her "personality" especially this one involving Doctor Manhattan.



the model is 6500 triangles right now.



as always any feedback is really welcome

yash

Woahh dude!! I don't know critics but this is awesome!! I'm new to game art still and in 6.5K tris this looks amazing! Good job!

Ribtibs

Haha powergirl. This is really cool man, my only question is whether it was intentional to have the legs be a head longer than the top half of the body. Proportionally its a bit odd, but if its intentional then what do I know?! Nice texture work and execution man!

M4rt3

yash Thanks actually right now it's under 6k but i already added more subdivision to the parts that are working bad with the rig.

Ribtibs yeah u're right and actually i think i'm going to scale up the head just a bit (right now the proportions are ultra-heroic °-°

dvisionvoid

Nice work dude! The face reminds me her haha

M4rt3

ahah man u nailed it xD

slosh

Looks pretty solid. The right arm looks odd to me. I think when you posed it, you lost a lot of natural volume in her forearm as it looks really thin around the elbow. Also, her fist looks strange too. Im guessing you just posed it with the rig and didnt go back and fix the volume you lost there too. Good work so far though!

PyrZern

Really like the color of her face. Any tips ^^ ?

I think her legs look very long also because of how her outfit is cut. Instead of her crotch as the separator, her outfit tricks the eyes to feel like her waist is now the separator between upper and lower body instead.

I Like Feet

very nice, however I think you have too much red on her face, especially around her eyes. With the pale skin, it makes it look like she's done a line of coke and hasn't slept in two days. I suggest darkening the skin tone or toning down the blushings.