TrainWagon

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Hey everyone!

i just made this small train wagon, i made it in like 3-4 days.

its supposed to be this empty so i only payed attention to the big props because its kinda of a school project.

any tips?

( rendered in CryEngine 3 )

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  • Uberren
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    Uberren polycounter lvl 4
    Looks nice, but a couple of things stick out to me.
    Given how dirty and beaten up a lot of the scene looks, the doors look much too clean and polished in comparison. Same with the handrails, but I can see wear on them, it just seems like the lighting is washing out a lot of that detail.
    The handrails also do not look like they are attached to the inside of the carriage. They look like they're placed there and floating a bit.
  • ESFGames
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    ESFGames polycounter lvl 4
    Uberren wrote: »
    Looks nice, but a couple of things stick out to me.
    Given how dirty and beaten up a lot of the scene looks, the doors look much too clean and polished in comparison. Same with the handrails, but I can see wear on them, it just seems like the lighting is washing out a lot of that detail.
    The handrails also do not look like they are attached to the inside of the carriage. They look like they're placed there and floating a bit.

    Hey! thanks for your advice.

    is this looking better?

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