Solid Snake MGS1 WIP sculpt

Erasius

Hello everyone, this is my first thread on Polycount, and also my first character sculpt, and I'd like to get some feedback.

The sculpt is part of a 3D modelling assignment for my University, in which we have to sculpt a character and turn it into a game rez mesh with baked Normal and AO maps.

I want to have this model retopologized/Uv-ed and baked within a couple of day's / next week, so I'm calling this sculpt "pretty much done" because I don't have enough time to make big changes ( unless they are really necessary )

I do however have time to fix things which would increase the quality of the sculpt, and I would like to hear some suggestions.

Feedback I've got so far:
Deltoid ( shoulder guard tucked undearneath his shirt) looks odd,
Feet are too small.
Edge of the skintight shirt on his throat looks weird.

Holster is a placeholder, currently modelling a HK mk23 socom for snake and a new holster.

If you have any suggestions, tips or crits, please share them with me.

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Visceral

Fantastic! Keeping an eye on this thread for sure!

Zi0

The model looks solid, its cool that you picked snake from the first game!

Fuiosg

There's issues with the proprortions. most notably the tiny hands.

I would also look into enlarging the feet and the whole lower body. They lack the bulk seen in the torso.

Also the head is a tad smallish,and the bandana lacks any feeling of weight in the back.

Lavitz

Looking good so far, only suggestion is when you add detail don't overdo it, keep him pretty simple.

Can't wait to see more progress.

ILLMATICC

Looking good man! Pretty amazing work for a first time sculpt.
First thing i would look to fix is the upper arms, the proportions are far too strange to overlook.
Keep going, i look forward to seeing this progress.

Erasius

Ty for feedback , I've been away for a while, finished the sculpt and currently retopologizing/UV/Baking, will be done with it this week, I'll post an update soon.