Duffy

HeV

Hello,
here is the main character from a french comic i really loved "Sha", draw by Olivier Ledroit whos a really talented artist.
I hope you'll like it and feel free to leave a comment ! i'll take all criticisms
cheers

Jalcober

Awesome! Really like how you sculpted the cloth.

warxsnake

Love it!

D4V1DC

Love It, I'd like to see a shot of the actual comic character to go by.

oXYnary

I love the simplification you did on your clothing folds. Keeping them so simple and with almost a hardmodeled feel really adds to the idea she is a stylized/graphic character.

butt_sahib

looking rad!

Some cloth edges are so hard it makes it look as if theres a green channel flippage happening :P

mr_ace

looks cool, nice work. the face has a lot of character and the texturing has a nice stylised feel to it. the gun doesn't look the best, i don't know if that's because it's just based on the comic, or because not all that much time was dedicated to it, but hey, the characters great!

almighty_gir

my biggest problem with this, is that you've painted lighting values into the diffuse, so from some of the rendered angles it looks really weird mixed with the light placement in the scene.

HeV

thanks everybody for the kind words and feedbacks
so i've tried to find a good picture of her on the internet but was pretty hard. She doesn't look exactly the same with references i had but anyway, there she is

framedrop

really nice work

Di$array

No, i think you've done a good job by giving her a more sterner appearance. She looks like she's had a hard life of seeing what nobody should see and to that affect she oozes character. Good job man!

PaulP

This character looks good, nice work!. From a distance the cigarette isn't totally obvious, could be misinterpreted as a tooth pick. Maybe add some smoke effect, or add some more light and sat to the cig ember?

HeV

thank you guys
@ SCB : i've first added some smoke but it didn't look good, maybe a brighter red light for the ember could be better yes

merry christmas to all !