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I thought I would add some abandoned kiosk things to make it look like this area use to look like some kind of shady market was going on back here at one time, possibly a gun market or a drug market or some kind of illegal activity at one time, something that tells a story right.

Tell me what you think, I created the kiosks as separate pieces so I could create some variance in the look, plus a little bit of vert painting.


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  • rockguy
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    I think it looks great , maybe its not much feedback , but I think your angles dosent let me see much of the scene , also those wooden boxes maybe its the angle but the kinda look smaller than they should be.
  • Chase
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    Chase polycounter lvl 9
    Great scene. The lightening seems too dark on the right side. The wall just looks like it has spots on it. I'm liking how you scattered the trash and wood planks. Suttle touches make all the difference
  • Mark Dygert
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    I like the modeling, materials the layout but the lighting is letting the scene down a bit. The big glowing lights don't seem to be adding light to the scene, its all blue lighting without a contrasting color?

    Some of the barrels seem overly corroded (middle shot, left side)? Almost to the point of having been under water, or made out of mud?

    You might want to adjust the background color on the graphite alpha because spray paint wouldn't have a halo like that?
  • solarSailor
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    some quick updates


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